Rhythm and Rhyme Workshop
Martha J. Eshelman-Smith
(1/30/2006 11:21:00 PM)
This is well worth sharing. I find the rhyme pattern to be unusual and interesting: ababbcc dededdff. Do you know anything about the author?
(1/18/2006 3:32:00 AM)
Guess what? I will make two corrections to this poem and ask you what you think....:
5th line: came not a sound
12th line: so far away
Well? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
And Sally won't speak to me any more?
(12/26/2005 1:35:00 PM)
Crisp...lovely...reminded me of 'It came upon that midnight clear'...a beautiful carol that always makes me cry.
I love it. A good find.