Rhythm and Rhyme Workshop
(12/13/2005 3:58:00 PM)
Yes, Wayne, I loved this a lot, I have put a comment on it on your poems site. As I said then the last two lines are absolutely great, and a beautiful finale to the poem. Congrats. Love Ernestine XXX
(12/13/2005 9:47:00 AM)
There have been many poems posted about the current war situation but none have moved me as much as this! What an incredible poem! I hope you've posted it. (If you did I missed it...sorry.) Thanks for posting it here. Wow, I really am impressed with the depth and emotional thought that went into this poem Wayne. Great job. Sincerely, Mary
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