Rhythm and Rhyme Workshop
(10/17/2012 6:30:00 AM)
great, but don`t confine your feelings to just rhyming, use free verse or blank verse,
Okoronkwo Jackson Jonathan
(10/8/2012 2:40:00 PM)
I love your portrayed idea but you have to synchronize your lines to allow a free flow and sensational link. Add meaning I mean. Check the first two lines.