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The 4am Poet Worm Male, 26, United Kingdom (6/2/2010 6:45:00 PM)

So today is your birthday
and theres something worth knowing
i thought long and hard
about your birthday poem
God created heaven then earth
in just seven days
but took twice as long
on the mold for your face
He created the stars to place in the skies
sent a recipie to cadburys
and they made your eyes
then he went to da vinci
and he stayed for a while
the sculptured your body
and your B-Utiful smile
Then he travelled to Agra
and hired the finist tailor there
he worked for a month
as he braided your hair
So god went to venus
and she gave you passion
an abundence of love
and aphrodite's eye lashes
Then Ralph lauren
sponsored your skin
used peaches and cream
and mixed it all in
He winked and he smiled
as he gazed at your face
he added a kind caring nature
and filled you with grace
Then he stood back and admired
at all he'd achieved
unprecidented beauty
that has to be seen
to be believed
...R4R
my favourite poem please vote if you liked it...

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  • Prakhar Mishra (5/3/2012 12:56:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    this poem is my one of my favorites as well.THE WORDS ARE NICELY put into their places, a rhythm divine is created.Keep it up

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