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Dr. A.celestine Raj Manohar Md
Male, 56, India
(3/12/2005 7:58:00 AM)
This is a poem in 'iambic dimeter form'
The Dancing Lass
The dancing girl:
She makes a whirl,
And twists and turns
In majesty;
With gestures made
For emotions,
She walks in style
And jumps awhile;
In shiny garb
Of silk: in hues
And plaited hair,
All flower-decked;
With painted face
And anklets belled;
Bejeweled much,
She moves with grace:
So rhythmical
To melody;
In solo/groups,
Gracefully stoops;
She’s trained so hard
A youthful star;
Her soul in art,
Enticing hearts:
A dancing belle
She does so well!
Copyright by Dr John Celes
2-9-2005
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Dan Redican
(3/26/2007 8:41:00 PM)
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Very nice.
Dimetre is such a difficult form.
There seem to be very few writers on this site who have much comprehension of the difficulties.