Rhythm and Rhyme Workshop

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  • David Crapper (12/31/2012 3:50:00 PM) Post reply


    Oblivion; eddies, tender tit-
    illation, spearheaded fluctuation;
    egressing from throat's abyss, our Father
    and Mother's virgin tongues lock in tranquil bliss.

    Por que brilliance bore membrane, Por qué?Porque!
    without porqué explodes synergies sin-
    gularity. Theories relativ-
    ity; therefore E=MC²!

  • Sarah Mohyla (12/18/2012 4:23:00 PM) Post reply

    Hey everyone! I'm new to this site and i'd appreciate it if you could take a look at my poems and comment on and rate them! thx! !

  • Austin Straussfield (12/14/2012 7:49:00 AM) Post reply

    Check this out peeps, though a little rough...your advice and criticism is would go a long way to smoothen my writings
    Quietly bending my pride,
    for you to become my bride
    so as to have a smooth ride
    till a child comes our way.
    Take this not as dried
    or too crunchy fried.
    But rather be mild,
    and see me as wild
    with no where to hide
    'trying to pass the tide
    created by your dad...'

  • Gary Kedron (12/13/2012 10:02:00 PM) Post reply

    Hi...kind of new to the site, any takers on reading my work?" Thy Hunts Mans Hound" , I like this one...any feedback would be greatly appreciated...When I can will return the favor.

  • Maxwell Mlenga (12/3/2012 4:30:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    its not all about writting poetry, its about writting poetry that people can understand, after all, its all about informing and hoping to change some hearts

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    • Donnaj York (12/16/2012 10:37:00 PM) Post reply

      I agree wholeheartedly. If after reading a poem my mind says, " wHaT???" , then that is, at least not my preferred poetry style, of poetry. Worse yet when I have no idea what I am reading. ... more

  • Yahya Ahmed (11/20/2012 7:15:00 PM) Post reply

    Hi everyone :)

    Im new on this site please check out some of my writing.

    Thank You

    Yahya Ahmed

  • Gajanan Mishra (11/18/2012 9:10:00 AM) Post reply

    It is true
    I am totally yours
    I accept you in toto
    O my love
    You are my universe
    And you are my pleasure
    And I am writing poetry
    Only for you

  • Godfrey Morris (11/17/2012 10:42:00 AM) Post reply

    Silent Soul

    I am a poet
    silently hidden in life's closet
    with half-measured expressions
    seeking to be made whole
    secret imagination longing
    to be bold
    I am the wind
    that echoes in your head
    I am your reason
    your silent unknown

    copyright(c) 2012

  • Alexis ... (11/10/2012 1:00:00 PM) Post reply

    Hello Fellow Poets,

    I invite you to Read and Comment honestly on my new poem " Caught In Distance" . Thank-you

  • Crystal Rosser (11/4/2012 3:09:00 PM) Post reply

    Please check out my poems and comment on a couple. I would really love to get some feedback on rhythmic and rhyming patterns. Any advice is helpful. Thanks!

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