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  • Rookie - 0 Points The 4am Poet Worm (6/2/2010 6:45:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply
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    So today is your birthday
    and theres something worth knowing
    i thought long and hard
    about your birthday poem
    God created heaven then earth
    in just seven days
    but took twice as long
    on the mold for your face
    He created the stars to place in the skies
    sent a recipie to cadburys
    and they made your eyes
    then he went to da vinci
    and he stayed for a while
    the sculptured your body
    and your B-Utiful smile
    Then he travelled to Agra
    and hired the finist tailor there
    he worked for a month
    as he braided your hair
    So god went to venus
    and she gave you passion
    an abundence of love
    and aphrodite's eye lashes
    Then Ralph lauren
    sponsored your skin
    used peaches and cream
    and mixed it all in
    He winked and he smiled
    as he gazed at your face
    he added a kind caring nature
    and filled you with grace
    Then he stood back and admired
    at all he'd achieved
    unprecidented beauty
    that has to be seen
    to be believed
    ...R4R
    my favourite poem please vote if you liked it...

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    • Rookie - 0 Points Prakhar Mishra (5/3/2012 12:56:00 AM) Post reply

      this poem is my one of my favorites as well.THE WORDS ARE NICELY put into their places, a rhythm divine is created.Keep it up

  • Rookie Amy Martin (5/18/2010 8:56:00 AM) Post reply

    They say that times a healer they say that you'll be fine,
    They say that wounds heal quickly given thought and time.
    They say that broken hearts will one day beat again,
    But since you left me darling all ive seen is rain.
    They say that times a healer they say they say you'll be ok,
    But how can i stay with you when all you do is stray.
    I wish that you were here with me to wipe away my tears,
    To hold me close and comfort me and chase away my fears.
    When i am feeling lonely theres no place for me to go,
    For everybody's left me and now i stand alone.
    They say that times a healer they say dont fall apart,
    But how can i forget you when your still within my heart.

  • Rookie Boon Ang (5/12/2010 8:57:00 PM) Post reply

    It is certainly not a crime
    If your poems do not rhyme
    As a matter of fact it's now thought
    It may be better if they not

    Unless they come without haste
    And fall naturally into place
    It is neater, there's no doubt
    Simply just to leave them out

    Iambic meter or otherwise
    Not rhyming is never a vice
    It may even be seen as awkward
    Unless employed in a formal sonnet

    Especially if you try to force them in
    Although that's not exactly a sin
    The present participle is just too much
    If used repeatedly as a crutch

    Vers Libre is the way to go
    As most current poets know
    Don't get caught up in the past
    Write yours modern, make them last

  • Rookie Boon Ang (5/12/2010 3:20:00 AM) Post reply

    Heaven can wait

    Imagining how things will go,
    Right at the very end.
    I hope it's hot; I hate the cold
    And working with my hands.

    I would love to float on clouds,
    Look down upon the world.
    Just hope the harps are not too loud,
    Cause string ensembles make me hurl.

  • Rookie Alexander Mcguire (4/27/2010 8:32:00 PM) Post reply

    Im writing this post its my very first
    A joke it is niether nor is it rehearsed
    i dont really try to find words that rhyme
    but flow like rivers that fall from the sky
    who cares if its truth
    who cares if its lies
    u think that ill care about stupid replys
    it crys like the ocean
    floats like dung
    emotion is joking
    and still so much fun

  • Rookie - 26 Points Trade Martin (4/15/2010 8:07:00 PM) Post reply

    “VENTRILOQUIST SEEKS NEW PROSPECTS”


    Yes, I’m sorry to say……..,
    That my ventriloquist……..,
    Suddenly dumped my account……,
    So I’ve been very saddened…….,
    And taken by surprise......,
    By this abrupt action…….,
    (Everyone knows how much I needed him) ……,
    But now I’ve discovered…….,
    The fact the he’s soliciting…….,
    The White House……..,
    For possible retirees (new accounts) ……..,
    Who don’t want the negative stigma…….,
    Of getting badly beaten in November…….! ! !

    …..Trade Martin,2010.

    Copyright 2010 Trade Martin Music, Inc.
    Innovation Digital Of America.
    All rights reserved. International copyright secured
    WWW.TRADEMARTINMUSIC.COM

  • Rookie Patrice Lapeyre (4/15/2010 5:56:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    I've been looking for a cogent word other than kiss (of course) rhyming with Balkis in English or French. I'm a new member but an old hand at poem crafting. Lending me a useful one would be a welcome gift into this revered community.

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    • Rookie Trade Martin (4/15/2010 8:05:00 PM) Post reply

      May I suggest 'tenderness' or 'emptiness'...., of course there are a number of others like the 'previous'.....! ! !

  • Rookie Bryandominic Chidiebere (4/8/2010 2:39:00 PM) Post reply

    Greetings to you. Well, I must say that we are carious and cariousity keep leading us down new paths. Who will answer this qestion? . Do you write to have fun and pleature or do you write to make fund? . Help me out, through which means do you post your poems. I have many and how do you get your published. please e-mail me (zemarc91@yahoo.com) . Thanks

  • Rookie Bryandominic Chidiebere (4/8/2010 2:38:00 PM) Post reply

    Greetings to you. Well, I must say that we are carious and cariousity keep leading us down new paths. Who will answer this qestion? . Do you write to have fun and pleature or do you write to make fund? . Help me out, through which means do you post your poems. I have many and how do you get your published. please e-mail me (zemarc91@yahoo.com) . Thanks

  • Rookie - 253 Points Dr. Yogesh Sharma (4/7/2010 5:18:00 PM) Post reply

    Dear, read my poems as and when you can spare some time from your busy schedule to see the real, ugly and, fascist face of the world. Kindly comment and vote on A Prayer For NEW YEAR, Life Imprisoned, Multicultural Liberated Family, Republic Day Parade, True Love.

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    With warm regards and good wishes,

    Dr. Yogesh Sharma

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