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  • Trade Martin Rookie - 1st Stage (4/15/2010 8:07:00 PM) Post reply

    “VENTRILOQUIST SEEKS NEW PROSPECTS”


    Yes, I’m sorry to say……..,
    That my ventriloquist……..,
    Suddenly dumped my account……,
    So I’ve been very saddened…….,
    And taken by surprise......,
    By this abrupt action…….,
    (Everyone knows how much I needed him) ……,
    But now I’ve discovered…….,
    The fact the he’s soliciting…….,
    The White House……..,
    For possible retirees (new accounts) ……..,
    Who don’t want the negative stigma…….,
    Of getting badly beaten in November…….! ! !

    …..Trade Martin,2010.

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  • Patrice Lapeyre Rookie - 1st Stage (4/15/2010 5:56:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    I've been looking for a cogent word other than kiss (of course) rhyming with Balkis in English or French. I'm a new member but an old hand at poem crafting. Lending me a useful one would be a welcome gift into this revered community.

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    • Trade Martin Rookie - 1st Stage (4/15/2010 8:05:00 PM) Post reply

      May I suggest 'tenderness' or 'emptiness'...., of course there are a number of others like the 'previous'.....! ! !

  • Bryandominic Chidiebere Rookie - 1st Stage (4/8/2010 2:39:00 PM) Post reply

    Greetings to you. Well, I must say that we are carious and cariousity keep leading us down new paths. Who will answer this qestion? . Do you write to have fun and pleature or do you write to make fund? . Help me out, through which means do you post your poems. I have many and how do you get your published. please e-mail me (zemarc91@yahoo.com) . Thanks

  • Bryandominic Chidiebere Rookie - 1st Stage (4/8/2010 2:38:00 PM) Post reply

    Greetings to you. Well, I must say that we are carious and cariousity keep leading us down new paths. Who will answer this qestion? . Do you write to have fun and pleature or do you write to make fund? . Help me out, through which means do you post your poems. I have many and how do you get your published. please e-mail me (zemarc91@yahoo.com) . Thanks

  • Dr. Yogesh Sharma Rookie - 1st Stage (4/7/2010 5:18:00 PM) Post reply

    Dear, read my poems as and when you can spare some time from your busy schedule to see the real, ugly and, fascist face of the world. Kindly comment and vote on A Prayer For NEW YEAR, Life Imprisoned, Multicultural Liberated Family, Republic Day Parade, True Love.

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    With warm regards and good wishes,

    Dr. Yogesh Sharma

  • Nick Jordan Rookie - 1st Stage (3/31/2010 5:17:00 PM) Post reply

    Please my horror poem 'The Room'. I changed quite a bit of the piece for a better flow. Any comments and/or ratings would be appreciated, and I will be sure to do the same for you. Thanks!

  • Gerald Sedillo Rookie - 1st Stage (3/22/2010 5:13:00 PM) Post reply

    I feel that too many people use rhyme like a blunt object, flailing madly and in their own process destroying the poem they are trying to make. People should consider muting the rhyme with enjambing of the lines and removing end-stop lines from the areas to be rhymed. Too many AABB rhyme schemes out there. It hurts...

  • Robin Eriksson Rookie - 1st Stage (3/21/2010 3:04:00 AM) Post reply

    mine rims a bit check them out =)

    http: //www.freshmensadjustments.blogspot.com/

    follow me and every day i will post new stuffs i hope you people can get insperation from this ^^

  • Joshua Poetical King Sovea Rookie - 1st Stage (3/8/2010 7:07:00 AM) Post reply

    Mental Insanity, Invisions Of The Lame, The Hardstyle Feeling Is The Thought Invain, The Feeling Of Wonder, The Sound That Goes, The Thought That Death Is Near Yet Slow, You Know That Life Is Like A Speeding Train, Yet They Scream Out Thoughts Tha Make Your Blood Drain, The Posibiltiys Of Thoughts And The Act, But in The End Were Wtill Under Deaths Attck! !

    - Joshua Poetical King Sovea

    Thats just some stuff i do when im at school and i Cant Be Botherd To Listen to The Teacher...

  • Jonathan Leong Rookie - 1st Stage (2/22/2010 11:44:00 PM) Post reply

    Greetings from the outter dimensions. I am a poet currently seeking advice on what I should expect when publishing books. My goal this decade is to publish my first two books, one on poetry and another concerning a science fiction novel. I am a freshmen in high school and I do realize I have much to learn, so please, anything you can do to help would be great!

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