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  • Rookie - 13 Points Nic Hillen (1/23/2013 5:58:00 PM) Post reply
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    i have got a few new poems on my page i would be grateful to hear some comments and feedback from them and maybe rate them as you feel it deserves....many thanks

  • Rookie Arron Fowler (1/17/2013 2:18:00 AM) Post reply

    Hey guys i have only just started writing poems i need some more friends to share thoughts with and i need comments on my poems
    check out my new one Theres a Succubuss in my bedroom. Thankyou i will read your poems too NEEEED MORE FRIENDS AHHA.

  • Rookie Michael Peters (1/12/2013 9:19:00 AM) Post reply

    Transparent Golem

    In a cold of space there is no sound
    That in mischief can be found.

    Prank on those who think it's not
    Just another scoundrel act.

    Hurt on those who can't adapt.
    They must perish or be trapped.

    Look alike their dreams must be.
    Deuce won't sleep, so why won't thee.

    Keeping sane - it is not hard,
    'cause in space there is no sound.

  • Rookie Michael Peters (1/12/2013 9:15:00 AM) Post reply

    Transparent Golem

    In a cold of space there is no sound
    That in mischief can be found.

    Prank on those who think it's not
    Just another scoundrel act.

    Hurt on those who can't adapt.
    They must perish or be trapped.

    Look alike their dreams must be.
    Deuce won't sleep, so why won't thee.

    Keeping sane - it is not hard,
    'cause in space there is no sound.

  • Rookie David Crapper (1/6/2013 5:05:00 PM) Post reply

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    Foundation- pep golden locomotive;
    For we are legion, arisen. Make stand!
    Denounce intellectualize ism!
    Make way for artist revolution!

    Out of the ashes we declare emotion ism
    gifting to society a new eternal oxyopia!
    Beyond the establishment discord course,
    phoenix expostulates for it's cause.

    When artists creativity has reached Zen-
    Extirpate Maya; Zenith's true rebuker;
    break free from ancient archons' bonds!
    feed not the dreaded snakes of Medusa.
    denounce draconian isms spoon fed lies!

    Stray left;
    serendipity!

    Advance right;
    Predicament...

    Problem
    fixer;
    cement
    mixer!

  • Rookie David Crapper (12/31/2012 3:50:00 PM) Post reply

    HAPPY NEW YEAR!

    Oblivion; eddies, tender tit-
    illation, spearheaded fluctuation;
    egressing from throat's abyss, our Father
    and Mother's virgin tongues lock in tranquil bliss.

    Por que brilliance bore membrane, Por qué?Porque!
    without porqué explodes synergies sin-
    gularity. Theories relativ-
    ity; therefore E=MC²!

  • Rookie Sarah Mohyla (12/18/2012 4:23:00 PM) Post reply

    Hey everyone! I'm new to this site and i'd appreciate it if you could take a look at my poems and comment on and rate them! thx! !

  • Rookie Austin Straussfield (12/14/2012 7:49:00 AM) Post reply

    Check this out peeps, though a little rough...your advice and criticism is would go a long way to smoothen my writings
    Quietly bending my pride,
    for you to become my bride
    so as to have a smooth ride
    till a child comes our way.
    Take this not as dried
    or too crunchy fried.
    But rather be mild,
    and see me as wild
    with no where to hide
    'trying to pass the tide
    created by your dad...'

  • Rookie - 21 Points Gary Kedron (12/13/2012 10:02:00 PM) Post reply

    Hi...kind of new to the site, any takers on reading my work?" Thy Hunts Mans Hound" , I like this one...any feedback would be greatly appreciated...When I can will return the favor.
    Enjoy.

  • Rookie Maxwell Mlenga (12/3/2012 4:30:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    its not all about writting poetry, its about writting poetry that people can understand, after all, its all about informing and hoping to change some hearts

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    • Rookie Donnaj York (12/16/2012 10:37:00 PM) Post reply

      I agree wholeheartedly. If after reading a poem my mind says, " wHaT???" , then that is, at least not my preferred poetry style, of poetry. Worse yet when I have no idea what I am reading. ... more

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