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  • Michael Peters (1/12/2013 9:15:00 AM) Post reply

    Transparent Golem

    In a cold of space there is no sound
    That in mischief can be found.

    Prank on those who think it's not
    Just another scoundrel act.

    Hurt on those who can't adapt.
    They must perish or be trapped.

    Look alike their dreams must be.
    Deuce won't sleep, so why won't thee.

    Keeping sane - it is not hard,
    'cause in space there is no sound.

  • David Crapper (1/6/2013 5:05:00 PM) Post reply

    Art Foundation Manifesto

    Foundation- pep golden locomotive;
    For we are legion, arisen. Make stand!
    Denounce intellectualize ism!
    Make way for artist revolution!

    Out of the ashes we declare emotion ism
    gifting to society a new eternal oxyopia!
    Beyond the establishment discord course,
    phoenix expostulates for it's cause.

    When artists creativity has reached Zen-
    Extirpate Maya; Zenith's true rebuker;
    break free from ancient archons' bonds!
    feed not the dreaded snakes of Medusa.
    denounce draconian isms spoon fed lies!

    Stray left;

    Advance right;


  • David Crapper (12/31/2012 3:50:00 PM) Post reply


    Oblivion; eddies, tender tit-
    illation, spearheaded fluctuation;
    egressing from throat's abyss, our Father
    and Mother's virgin tongues lock in tranquil bliss.

    Por que brilliance bore membrane, Por qué?Porque!
    without porqué explodes synergies sin-
    gularity. Theories relativ-
    ity; therefore E=MC²!

  • Sarah Mohyla (12/18/2012 4:23:00 PM) Post reply

    Hey everyone! I'm new to this site and i'd appreciate it if you could take a look at my poems and comment on and rate them! thx! !

  • Austin Straussfield (12/14/2012 7:49:00 AM) Post reply

    Check this out peeps, though a little rough...your advice and criticism is would go a long way to smoothen my writings
    Quietly bending my pride,
    for you to become my bride
    so as to have a smooth ride
    till a child comes our way.
    Take this not as dried
    or too crunchy fried.
    But rather be mild,
    and see me as wild
    with no where to hide
    'trying to pass the tide
    created by your dad...'

  • Gary Kedron Rookie - 1st Stage (12/13/2012 10:02:00 PM) Post reply

    Hi...kind of new to the site, any takers on reading my work?" Thy Hunts Mans Hound" , I like this one...any feedback would be greatly appreciated...When I can will return the favor.

  • Maxwell Mlenga Rookie - 1st Stage (12/3/2012 4:30:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    its not all about writting poetry, its about writting poetry that people can understand, after all, its all about informing and hoping to change some hearts

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    • Donnaj York (12/16/2012 10:37:00 PM) Post reply

      I agree wholeheartedly. If after reading a poem my mind says, " wHaT???" , then that is, at least not my preferred poetry style, of poetry. Worse yet when I have no idea what I am reading. ... more

  • Yahya Ahmed Rookie - 1st Stage (11/20/2012 7:15:00 PM) Post reply

    Hi everyone :)

    Im new on this site please check out some of my writing.

    Thank You

    Yahya Ahmed

  • Gajanan Mishra Bronze Star - 4th Stage (11/18/2012 9:10:00 AM) Post reply

    It is true
    I am totally yours
    I accept you in toto
    O my love
    You are my universe
    And you are my pleasure
    And I am writing poetry
    Only for you

  • Godfrey Morris Rookie - 1st Stage (11/17/2012 10:42:00 AM) Post reply

    Silent Soul

    I am a poet
    silently hidden in life's closet
    with half-measured expressions
    seeking to be made whole
    secret imagination longing
    to be bold
    I am the wind
    that echoes in your head
    I am your reason
    your silent unknown

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