(2/14/2013 8:38:00 PM)
Ummmmm....... This is an attractive poem but it's not free form. It has both rhyme and meter. Free form means no rhyme or meter. My favorite example of free verse is " Space. The final frontier. These are the voyages of the Starship Enterprise. Etc." You have undeniable talent as a writer, so keep writing. But don't be afraid to pick up a text book (or a book on poetic forms) along the way. You'll never regret it, and you owe it to yourself and other poets.