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Linda Neill Poet Digter Linda Neill Poet Digter Female, 50, South Africa (1/31/2013 3:06:00 PM)

I am

I..
I am…
I am Eve
I am day
I am woman
God made me this way

I..
I am…
I am rib
I am love
I am Adams’ dove
Adam’s love made me this way
Copyright Linda Neill

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  • Theresa Haffner (2/14/2013 8:38:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    Ummmmm....... This is an attractive poem but it's not free form. It has both rhyme and meter. Free form means no rhyme or meter. My favorite example of free verse is " Space. The final frontier. These are the voyages of the Starship Enterprise. Etc." You have undeniable talent as a writer, so keep writing. But don't be afraid to pick up a text book (or a book on poetic forms) along the way. You'll never regret it, and you owe it to yourself and other poets.

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