(1/10/2011 4:06:00 AM)
I like this poem very much. I live in Indonesia and we have thunder that echos for ages across the sky. Someone huge up there is doing the triple jump! You must know this, being from Malaysia. I love your poem, it has a good flow and a lovely ending.It speaks to me. Thanks.
(5/9/2010 10:08:00 AM)
I like you poem, if I had to rate this I would give it a nine, it is refreshing, great job.
Comment of the Day
- A very well constructed poem with perfect rhyming beautifully written