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Morgan Barbaro Female, 27, United States (3/16/2005 6:12:00 PM)

hi again
here is a poem for christians

god

he lends us a helping hand
he took his life for us
he got beaten and died on the cross for us
he always will help us believe
he will never let you bleed
he helps you through the good and bad
he is are only lord
God

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  • Willem VanVoorthuysen (5/8/2005 8:43:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    Dear Morgan,
    You are so right! May God bless you for having the courage to witness in poetry. Keep writing Christian poetry, but also try to read as much of it as possible. That will help strengthen your faith as well as improve your ability to use the writing talents God gave you.
    Warm greetings from 'Opa' Willem

    P.S.: 'Opa' means 'Grandfather' in the Dutch language (I'm 88 yrs old)

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