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Lukas Woyzeck Male, 32, Belgium (2/2/2005 2:43:00 AM)

hey...i ve created this poem yesterday, it s my first english poem ever i hope u enjoy it:

Shadow, you ever running deserteur,
Shadow, runner of the walls past,
Have you ever taken the time to look at the sun,
Just looking, forgetting your real dedication

Shadow, you friend of those who want to rest,
You, that enlarge ourselves in the eye of the mighty light,
Representing ourselves the way we might want to be,
But when we turn our looks into the sun we know,
How small we really are
And you only are
Cause of us
Shame on

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  • Rookie Brenda Fischer (2/21/2005 6:14:00 PM) Post reply
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    Hahaa! You had me at:

    Shame on

    *thumbs up*

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