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  • John Hazon Palen (5/3/2012 8:33:00 PM) Post reply

    Whatever you may call this, just know that this came from my heart:

    I love! I thank all the people behind this website for the support they've given to me since I joined in. This encourages me in a lot of ways as I also am taking a degree in BS InfoTech, lucky enough being a gov't scholar to help my family. I am looking forward in the future about working for such wonderful website. I hope it will be as sooner as possible for I want to get my mom to the hospital to get checked up because she now suffers from an illness which really does bother me. If only I can treat her and take away the pain by myself, I wouldn't take the risk of putting my reputation low. I need someone who can help me all for the love of my family. I have my dreams in life and it includes for all the members of my family, especially my dear parents. Out of all the things in life that I could fear, the only thing that would hurt me is if I'd loose someone I love!

  • M.L Bennett (4/15/2012 12:37:00 AM) Post reply

    What's the difference in posting on our page and posting here?I didn't sit down and analyze and diagram any of my ideas... make out some scientific formula for how they should be written out, if that's really how poets usually write. If that's the case, then maybe I'm the only one who should ever read what I write.

  • Sky Welch Rookie - 1st Stage (4/12/2012 3:15:00 PM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

    Sonnet 1: Secrets and death coincide!
    For sooth! O secrets that keep life a drift
    Livens death which brings pain to all of life
    What secrecy that gives but hath no gift
    Secrets to lies that make life full of strife
    But man will cause pain upon the trusting
    When truth be revealed pain shall rein through out
    Secrets have no truth and death no sting
    And animals have no secrets or doubt
    Hidden from the world are conspiracies
    Hidden by those who do great deeds
    But fools they are to force tendencies
    And make the lies that's to fester and feeds
    Secrets lead to lies of death in the night
    Death, secrets, lies give the world quite a fright.

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    • Gabhriel Londe (6/28/2012 2:45:00 PM) Post reply

      I thought this was the freeform forum??

    • M.L Bennett (4/15/2012 12:40:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

      Sky, this is very insightful and you have a wonderful handle on vocabulary. I honestly enjoyed pondering the meaning behind your words and interpreting what it meant to me.

  • Thabo Rasego Rookie - 1st Stage (4/11/2012 5:14:00 AM) Post reply

    Hello, you all poetry Fanatics!
    I have posted some of my poems in, can you please spare your moment to read them and don't be shy to comment about them.

  • Sky Welch Rookie - 1st Stage (4/10/2012 9:17:00 AM) Post reply

    very eligant from my perspective. is this a forum for like random poems that are freeverse. like can we just type up a poem on here and get feedback or do we have to fill out a form?

  • jas Cagz Rookie - 1st Stage (4/3/2012 6:46:00 PM) Post reply

    (FALLEN ANGEL) Fallen angel, yeah man datz me' long time past loving Criminalitee, a father per say one sunny day, my hardcore shell stripping away, self harm bollockz nasty shit, alwayz climbing from the dreaded pit, ma kidz come along man ah woz saved, had da gud life I alwayz craved, a bank robber tho of the highest class, bonnie and clyde cudnt touch ma ass.

  • jas Cagz Rookie - 1st Stage (4/3/2012 6:36:00 PM) Post reply

    Hello my name is Cagz I, d appreciate any constructive opinions no such thing as bad just learning, tgc

  • Fadwa Gmiden Rookie - 1st Stage (3/29/2012 3:23:00 AM) Post reply

    hello everyone,
    I would like you to take a look to my poems and criticize them please.

  • Kumar Parashar Rookie - 1st Stage (3/25/2012 12:22:00 PM) Post reply

    hello all, i have posted few poems and would love to get some comments on them. thank you all

  • William Ndweisile Somenze Rookie - 1st Stage (3/17/2012 10:00:00 AM) Post reply

    hello groves of poe-tree i have posted number of poems i would like you to eye at them and leave your comments, good or bad, thank you :)

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