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  • Rookie daughter of a seafoam (9/13/2007 8:16:00 AM) Post reply
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    Hey, everyone.. I would really love to improve my writing.. I hope you can comment or give suggestions for my poems. Just click this link. n_n http: //www.poemhunter.com/daughter-of-a-seafoam/poems/

  • Rookie Ayn Timmerman (9/6/2007 1:29:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    I'm looking for a few people to read my poem 'The Horsewoman (For Ellen) '. I am considering submitting it to a publication, and any coments/ ratings would be greatly appreciated.
    Thanks!

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    • Rookie Kk Walrus (9/8/2007 1:47:00 PM) Post reply

      Hello Ayn, Would welcome the opportunity to read your poem 'The Horsewoman (For Ellen) .' walrus

  • Rookie Mad Scroach (8/17/2007 8:10:00 PM) Post reply

    Here is a link to my manuscript A Rare Dance Won With 8 Guineas:

    slowdancingsleepwalker.googlepages.com/araredancewonwith8guineas

    Please feel free to email me if you have any questions.

    Take care,

    Mad Scroach

  • Rookie Tired of Being Exploited (8/8/2007 5:57:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Hello poem writing friends! I am currently writing a rather large experimental set of poems, the second of which is called [DENSITY]. I am requesting your readership on it and I want your gut reaction of emotion added as a comment. No it is not classical, it is pure raw energy stream of consciousness prose designed to evoke a sensation from the reader. I need to know how it affects YOU. I can take the abuse if you feel the need to lambaste the work, just please leave something... Thanks!

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    • Rookie Kk Walrus (9/8/2007 1:51:00 PM) Post reply

      Hello Jack, Your poetry sounds like it's right up my alley! I am more then willing to rip it to shit at your invitation...LOL Kidding, I can appreciate where you are coming from ;) walrus

  • Rookie Bryan Mahoney (7/30/2007 2:22:00 AM) Post reply

    http: //www.poemhunter.com/bryan-mahoney/

  • Rookie Emma Whelt (7/28/2007 8:31:00 AM) Post reply

    we all enter life the same way,
    we all leave life the same why,
    your life will only be as gd as you make it,
    if you cry and you dont smile,
    you'l be alone for quite a while,
    theres only so much comfort one person can give,
    theres only so much sympathy one person can give,
    you need to want the help to appreciate it,
    you need to help yourself,
    only when you love you self can you truely love another.

  • Rookie Emma Whelt (7/28/2007 8:26:00 AM) Post reply

    optimism is the key to keep you smilying happily

  • Rookie Emma Whelt (7/28/2007 8:25:00 AM) Post reply

    Because sometimes this life is hard,
    its almost like a game of cards,
    not enough thought and you will loose,
    to much thought and you will loose,
    keep your chin up straight,
    and eyes open wide,
    not eveyone will be you r friend,
    watch out for the ones taht will pretend,
    they will hurt you,
    and make you cry,
    with no body to blame but urself,
    it will only cause harm for yourself,
    because sometimes this life is hard,
    keep your chin up straight,
    and your eyes open wide

  • Rookie - 0 Points Karima Astrid P (7/23/2007 5:45:00 AM) Post reply

    Hello....
    I am looking for advices
    to improve my poetry writing
    thanks
    n_n

  • Rookie Adrian Merovingian (7/18/2007 5:48:00 PM) Post reply

    Sometimes, I go out of my way
    Or push to far over the line
    Some days I can't find the words to say
    What I want can never be mine
    Things are just not the way
    They used to be
    It's so hard accepting reality
    Thoughts are reeling in my head, I can't explain
    The way I'm feeling is mentally deranged
    though I've pryed your hooks from my lifeless skin
    It tears me up to hear you pleading
    Let me in again
    Let me in just one more time
    Face value equals nothing at all
    In the blink of an eye
    You can take the fall
    I'm chasing a memory
    Would be better off if I could let it be
    Thoughts keep comin to my head
    I'm chasing a memory
    We're living life as if anyone cared
    We are born as one
    We bleed the same
    Though the song remains unfinished
    You hear the cries
    You hear the screams
    Try to shake it out of your head
    As if never unseen
    This is a puzzle
    Never find the missing piece from me

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