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  • Amity Willows (9/15/2007 10:53:00 PM) Post reply

    I recently wrote a few poems about destruction and what happens after, and I was wondering if anyone would give me some feedback on them? Maybe just tell me a couple ways I could improve them, or your opinion of them. Any comments would be greatly appreciated. Here are the links to them:

    I recently wrote a few poems about destruction and what happens after, and I was wondering if anyone would give me some feedback on them? Maybe just tell me a couple ways I could improve them, or your opinion of them. Any comments would be greatly appreciated. Here are the links to them:

    http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/the-willow-of-amity/

    http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/hope-130/

    Thanks!

  • daughter of a seafoam (9/13/2007 8:16:00 AM) Post reply

    Hey, everyone.. I would really love to improve my writing.. I hope you can comment or give suggestions for my poems. Just click this link. n_n http: //www.poemhunter.com/daughter-of-a-seafoam/poems/

  • Ayn Timmerman (9/6/2007 1:29:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    I'm looking for a few people to read my poem 'The Horsewoman (For Ellen) '. I am considering submitting it to a publication, and any coments/ ratings would be greatly appreciated.
    Thanks!

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    • Kk Walrus (9/8/2007 1:47:00 PM) Post reply

      Hello Ayn, Would welcome the opportunity to read your poem 'The Horsewoman (For Ellen) .' walrus

  • Mad Scroach (8/17/2007 8:10:00 PM) Post reply

    Here is a link to my manuscript A Rare Dance Won With 8 Guineas:

    slowdancingsleepwalker.googlepages.com/araredancewonwith8guineas

    Please feel free to email me if you have any questions.

    Take care,

    Mad Scroach

  • Tired of Being Exploited (8/8/2007 5:57:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Hello poem writing friends! I am currently writing a rather large experimental set of poems, the second of which is called [DENSITY]. I am requesting your readership on it and I want your gut reaction of emotion added as a comment. No it is not classical, it is pure raw energy stream of consciousness prose designed to evoke a sensation from the reader. I need to know how it affects YOU. I can take the abuse if you feel the need to lambaste the work, just please leave something... Thanks!

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    • Kk Walrus (9/8/2007 1:51:00 PM) Post reply

      Hello Jack, Your poetry sounds like it's right up my alley! I am more then willing to rip it to shit at your invitation...LOL Kidding, I can appreciate where you are coming from ;) walrus

  • Bryan Mahoney (7/30/2007 2:22:00 AM) Post reply

    http: //www.poemhunter.com/bryan-mahoney/

  • Emma Whelt (7/28/2007 8:31:00 AM) Post reply

    we all enter life the same way,
    we all leave life the same why,
    your life will only be as gd as you make it,
    if you cry and you dont smile,
    you'l be alone for quite a while,
    theres only so much comfort one person can give,
    theres only so much sympathy one person can give,
    you need to want the help to appreciate it,
    you need to help yourself,
    only when you love you self can you truely love another.

  • Emma Whelt (7/28/2007 8:26:00 AM) Post reply

    optimism is the key to keep you smilying happily

  • Emma Whelt (7/28/2007 8:25:00 AM) Post reply

    Because sometimes this life is hard,
    its almost like a game of cards,
    not enough thought and you will loose,
    to much thought and you will loose,
    keep your chin up straight,
    and eyes open wide,
    not eveyone will be you r friend,
    watch out for the ones taht will pretend,
    they will hurt you,
    and make you cry,
    with no body to blame but urself,
    it will only cause harm for yourself,
    because sometimes this life is hard,
    keep your chin up straight,
    and your eyes open wide

  • Rookie - 0 Points Karima Astrid P (7/23/2007 5:45:00 AM) Post reply

    Hello....
    I am looking for advices
    to improve my poetry writing
    thanks
    n_n

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