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  • Rookie - 0 Points Sky Welch (4/12/2012 3:15:00 PM) Post reply | Read 2 replies
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    Sonnet 1: Secrets and death coincide!
    For sooth! O secrets that keep life a drift
    Livens death which brings pain to all of life
    What secrecy that gives but hath no gift
    Secrets to lies that make life full of strife
    But man will cause pain upon the trusting
    When truth be revealed pain shall rein through out
    Secrets have no truth and death no sting
    And animals have no secrets or doubt
    Hidden from the world are conspiracies
    Hidden by those who do great deeds
    But fools they are to force tendencies
    And make the lies that's to fester and feeds
    Secrets lead to lies of death in the night
    Death, secrets, lies give the world quite a fright.

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    • Rookie - 0 Points Gabhriel Londe (6/28/2012 2:45:00 PM) Post reply

      I thought this was the freeform forum??

    • Rookie - 0 Points M.L Bennett (4/15/2012 12:40:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

      Sky, this is very insightful and you have a wonderful handle on vocabulary. I honestly enjoyed pondering the meaning behind your words and interpreting what it meant to me.

  • Rookie Thabo Rasego (4/11/2012 5:14:00 AM) Post reply

    Hello, you all poetry Fanatics!
    I have posted some of my poems in, can you please spare your moment to read them and don't be shy to comment about them.

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sky Welch (4/10/2012 9:17:00 AM) Post reply

    very eligant from my perspective. is this a forum for like random poems that are freeverse. like can we just type up a poem on here and get feedback or do we have to fill out a form?

  • Rookie - 0 Points jas Cagz (4/3/2012 6:46:00 PM) Post reply

    (FALLEN ANGEL) Fallen angel, yeah man datz me' long time past loving Criminalitee, a father per say one sunny day, my hardcore shell stripping away, self harm bollockz nasty shit, alwayz climbing from the dreaded pit, ma kidz come along man ah woz saved, had da gud life I alwayz craved, a bank robber tho of the highest class, bonnie and clyde cudnt touch ma ass.

  • Rookie - 0 Points jas Cagz (4/3/2012 6:36:00 PM) Post reply

    Hello my name is Cagz I, d appreciate any constructive opinions no such thing as bad just learning, tgc

  • Rookie Fadwa Gmiden (3/29/2012 3:23:00 AM) Post reply

    hello everyone,
    I would like you to take a look to my poems and criticize them please.

  • Rookie Kumar Parashar (3/25/2012 12:22:00 PM) Post reply

    hello all, i have posted few poems and would love to get some comments on them. thank you all

  • Rookie William Ndweisile Somenze (3/17/2012 10:00:00 AM) Post reply

    hello groves of poe-tree i have posted number of poems i would like you to eye at them and leave your comments, good or bad, thank you :)

  • Rookie - 0 Points Besa Dede (3/10/2012 1:40:00 PM) Post reply

    Hello everyone! I am a new member as well, I have posted my first poems! I kindly invite everyone to read them. I would appreciate your review! Thanks, Besa :))

  • Rookie Sharna Mckeith (3/10/2012 11:05:00 AM) Post reply

    A family man loyal and true, would open the door to let you pass through. This is the man that would smile as he passed by, His hand that would help, your tears he would wipe, This is my brother whom i love and adore my brother i will miss as he goes on tour. Take care of him Afghanistan. (not much but just something that popped into my head as a new member go easy on me please) .xxx

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