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Ryan Mattock Male, 33, United Kingdom (3/11/2006 6:37:00 PM)

A journey of ends

Cant pick up the phone, for my head is too heavy.
Won't pick up the phone, I don't want to know.
For the one that I loved has gone and left me,
In a field of black roses, so far from my home!
I have to move forward, I must go on,
My heart is so weak, but my head is so strong,
so that is my story, I want you to know,
Im finally here! My beautiful home!

Ryan Mattock

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  • Rookie Aldo Kraas (1/26/2007 11:06:00 PM) Post reply
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    This poem is beautiful
    It is almost like a song

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