(3/3/2014 12:36:00 AM)
The poem seems to have been written on someone you know so well, a school friend perhaps, who is depressed being subject to bullying or unkind behaviour. I appreciate your efforts at cheering him/her up, your words expressing solidarity with him.
'But I hope you know that your not alone
Call me by picking up the phone' - It's indeed a great gesture of friendship.
'We all love you so very much
We all know you so we wont judge' - Hope your friend will be inspired by these soothing lines.
(2/8/2014 10:32:00 AM)
EMMA. A WONder ful poem successfully conveyed ur feeling. Please edit your poem. " to fade" not too fade it is because i read ur poem carefully. I AM NOT A CRITIC BUT A FRIEND. Thanks