Laci LeblancFemale, 24, United States(12/23/2005 1:53:00 PM)
I have written a couple of poems which send out a message to the reader: Mysteries in the Dark and The Wise Man. However, each have a completely different meaning. The Wise Man contains more of a lesson, while Mysteries in the Dark may be interpreted many different ways. I would sincerely appreciate it if I could recieve some feedback and a reader's interpretation and criticism towards these poems in particular. I am open to any suggestions on how to improve my writing. Thank You.