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Andrej Gylan Grampovcan Male, 60, Slovenia (8/5/2013 1:51:00 AM)

Do not tell me dear,
that love is no longer
and that you and I
only two memory
in the wind without passion.
Do not tell me dear,
that our blue wings
the ice was wrapped.
Do not tell me dear,
Hope that long gone,
even though they are still hot lips
and the heart still wants to.
Do not ask a dear,
one of us will lose more.
You Honey,
you know,
I can love others
as I have loved you.
But you, dear,
do not love you
I loved as I do.
And maybe that someone will love the spotlight Moon
Who knows?But that someone will not like me,
I do that a long time I was your face.
And Honey, happened to us all
and at the end without a handshake and a kiss good-bye.
For everything that once was.

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  • Rookie - 29 Points Badboy Vibes (8/5/2013 11:30:00 AM) Post reply | Read 2 replies
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    Why are you posting this....stuff, here?....If you can write some English then surely you can read it to?...Read what this thread is for and you may realise just how dis-respectful your attention seeking is...It would`nt be half as bad if what you wrote made any sence....but in the English you write, it does NOT....f...f...s.

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