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Roger Horsch Roger Horsch Male, 50, United States (5/17/2013 2:22:00 PM)

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Donnaj York, This is a very good poem. I can tell that it comes from your heart. It flows so good with great description. We need more poets in this world that can write like you just did. Keep it up. Your friend in poetry.

Roger Horsch

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  • Donnaj York (5/17/2013 6:01:00 PM) Post reply | Read 2 replies Stage

    Thank you Mr. Horsch. This means a lot coming from you, even though I don't know you, because in reading your comments, you clearly have poetic eye and ear, and the ability to advise in a thorough yet kind and gentle manner. I will be browsing your works.

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    • James Kastner (5/25/2013 7:36:00 AM) Post reply Stage

      If you consider this a finished work, I'll withold the notes I have for you on it. However, if you want to explore a revision, let me know. Personally, I think this poem has a great deal of potentia ... more

    • James Kastner (5/25/2013 7:31:00 AM) Post reply Stage

      If you don't consider this a finished poem, I have some notes which I think might improve a poem, which in my opinion has a great deal of potiental. If you have no desire to make revisions, and feel t ... more

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