(6/22/2012 7:49:00 AM)
hi, this is the first time i write a poem, hope everyone can comment on this, thanks so much (the inspiration is from H)
It is not a long time to see you then
Just long enough make me feel so strang
But inside that is not what I really mean
whether I am nervous what cha mind?
Wish we are alike at the first time smile
I was shy and you were high
Together like a butter-fly.
(6/21/2012 8:21:00 AM)
I've always been writing but only recently have I developed the courage
to see what others may think of my poetry.
I'd really like if you all could give my poetry a read and assess and evaluate
Any criticism and suggestions are welcome :) ..
Please read, rate and comment :)
I'd be very grateful to have a realistic understanding of my apparent skill :)
Thank you! .. :) ...
(6/19/2012 9:48:00 PM)
Thanks my teacher seemed to like my poems, and other writings, but somehow I always suspected he was being positive to encourage me. He never had anything negative to say, but occasionally would say something like, perhaps, elaborate a little more here. Most of the time his comments were positive in nature. I think you are right when you say it is art, it is to express your inner feelings; Its not a matter of what someone else likes. The other person will read their own interpretations and feelings into it. However you know how we humans like approval.
(6/18/2012 9:38:00 PM)
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I'm new here. I have just completed a couple semesters of creative writing. I have never done any writing previously, not even my theses for my masters. I would not even write a letter. I did not think I could do it. Suddenly, I am in the midst of writing day in and day out for various reasons. Therefore I decided I better improve my skills. I went back to college to take writing courses, and found it to be fun. Thus I moved on to creative writing. I have written a few poems; however, I have no idea if they are of interest to anyone, or if they are any good. How can you tell if a poem is any good? At any rate, where on this site can i type in a poem and get reaction to it?Replies for this message:
(6/19/2012 2:11:00 PM)
Post your poem. Sorry, some poems are bad - really really bad. But it doesn't matter what I nor anyone else thinks. All that matters is what you think. If you are writing for others it isn't art.
(6/18/2012 10:40:00 PM)
I believe that there is no such thing as a bad poem, every poem that is written is simply the expression of oneself and the reflection of life. Since your poem derived from within yourself and/or a re ... more
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(6/17/2012 9:55:00 PM)
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I'm searching for help on a well-known addiction to writers- writer's block. I've been having difficulties being able to get my thoughts out onto paper to even begin a poem... Can someone please assist?It would be much appreciated! ^_^Replies for this message:
(3/12/2013 6:23:00 PM)
I once had a writers block for 5 months.. I didn't knew what to do.. played music.. asked other people to tell me their problems and joy time.. nothing worked.. and then I wrote a poem abou inspiratio ... more
(8/7/2012 12:48:00 PM)
Ganesha is a Hindu God that recently has shown his face to me. He is the removers of obstacles, of blocks. Writer's block is one of his favorites. Read about Ganesha, and seek his help.
(7/16/2012 3:35:00 PM)
Hi Tiffany, i have only been writing poetry for about 3 years and i get my inspiration comes from life experiences. if you write from the heart you will start to develope your own style and will get b ... more
(6/20/2012 12:55:00 AM)
when i have trouble writing, i go for a ... more
(6/19/2012 2:08:00 PM)
In the Palm of Your Hand by Steve Kowit, ... more
(6/19/2012 2:06:00 PM)
I didn't write a word from 1998 to 2010. ... more
(6/18/2012 2:24:00 PM)
my teacher would always say to first lis ... more
(6/17/2012 10:01:00 PM)
I meant to write affliction, not addicti ... more
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(6/16/2012 7:18:00 AM)
AM VERY HAPPY TO JOIN THIS ROOM FOR MY FIRST TIME.MY APPRECIATION GO TO ALL MY FORUM.
THANKS TO THERE.
(6/14/2012 8:08:00 AM)
Hello poetry World, I am inviting you to view my latest poems, most recent being " Seek and Find"
(6/13/2012 2:23:00 AM)
THE SOOTHING EFFECT OF POETRY.
It was the election in our school for the office bearers of the school cabinet. I was also a candidate. We had our campaigning sessions. It was really a great exprience. The result was to be announced by the principal and we were all very anxious about the result. It was the day of elections and everyone was busy voting for their favourite candidates. I was sure that from my class I would get atleast 15 votes. But the outcome was really heartbreaking. I got just 4 votes and those votes were from my really best friends and that was it. All the others who had smiled in front of me were actually acting. They hated me and didnt vote for me. I still ponder over the fact as to why no one voted for me. Maybe it was the gratitude for all the help that I did for them. That day I secretly cried a lot. I was ashamed of my tears. There was no one to sooth me except poery. It was as a result of this that I wrote the poem " THE CHAMELEON" just to express the fact that this world has changed a lot. So my dear friends, rely on poetry when you cry, when you laugh or when you feel that the life you are living is just a mere waste. Because poetry is like the first rain in a desert that has not seen a dropp of that magical fantasy for decades.
(6/11/2012 6:41:00 AM)
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“Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion, ” as T. S. Eliot has pointed out. “It is not the expression of personality, but an escape from personality. But, of course, only those who have personality and emotions know what it means to want to escape from these things.”
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(6/4/2012 1:59:00 PM)
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A stream of thought
The swan opens her white wings slowly, she is majestic.
I see visions of chaste brides, novice nuns and new born babes.
The kaleidoscope of purity and innocence runs through my mind like a river of love.
The swan, unaware of my admiration, is tending her ugly ducklings.
Who will soon turn into beautiful swans?
I am reminded to be aware of the hidden beauty in everything,
Even the seemingly ugly.
Every creature, plant, stone or body of water has the possibility of becoming a rare thing of beauty.
Never assume that something is not worth admiring because it does not look attractive.
If you look carefully enough you will see the hidden beauty in all of God’s creations.
Does anyone think this is a poem?i have tried rhyming forms of poetry with little success, would like any comments, thank you, MargaretReplies for this message:
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