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  • Adam M. Snow (7/27/2012 4:46:00 PM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

    ****Please Comment****

    Through the Eyes of the Untold Lore

    Through these stained eyes, dark is all I see
    yet I try to live, believing this is me.
    But all I could do is place my heart on a page,
    and watch it rot away with every age.

    All I am through your eyes is a ghost,
    whom you don't dare miss the most.
    All you are through my eyes, is hopelessness;
    but my words I write are my distress.

    Peaking through my once soulless muse,
    as my heart lies victim to your solemn abuse.
    I live to be your puppet, nothing more
    but I am a writer of many lore.

    And as I dare write with missing heart,
    it is with you whom my stories start.

    -Adam M. Snow

    If you like this poem, please check out any of my other poems

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  • Ulveena Aitzaz (7/24/2012 1:56:00 AM) Post reply

    I've been writing for quite some time now. It was just a thing of leisure. Now I want to know if poems from the real life pull at heart strings. If not, what can I improve?

  • Hortensia Handy (7/23/2012 3:09:00 PM) Post reply

    The visit (haïku)

    One summer morning,
    It is the joy of the sun,
    I come back see you.

    Hortensia

  • Ugoh Ifeanyi (7/23/2012 7:49:00 AM) Post reply

    I would appreciate if u guys can cömment and vote on my poems, so as to really knw my stand.it helps you knw

  • Michelle Mcneill (7/20/2012 2:37:00 PM) Post reply

    hello
    could people read my poems
    and tell me what you think about them

  • Leyxus Warren (7/19/2012 10:37:00 PM) Post reply

    REACH FOR YOUR GOAL
    EVERYONE COUNTS
    SUMMER TIME
    PARTICIPATE IN ALL ACTIVITIES
    EVERDAY WE TOGETHER MAKES IT BETTER
    CREATIVE PEOPLE
    TOGETHER FOREVER

  • Nate Hawk (7/15/2012 3:56:00 PM) Post reply

    Hi all, just getting into this and recently posted my first attempt...any criticism is welcome. Scathing or otherwise.

  • Lars Reimers (7/15/2012 3:01:00 PM) Post reply

    In the twilight
    raindrops stopped falling



    color of the sky
    of the final horizon

  • Wasim Osmanee (7/11/2012 6:49:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    'One can't write poetry unless he knows wat he is writing about' said father of romantics, Wordsworth.so have ur theme set, before writing a poem e.g wat u r writing about and what to write. Express ur feeling by using poetic devices like similie, metaphor and pun etc. Don't get stuck to a particular thing but rather one should specially try to compare things by using similies carefully. Write every thing u know about ur theme and keep following Wordsworth and Keats.

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  • Peace Ogosime (7/6/2012 1:59:00 AM) Post reply

    Writing poetry is writing what u feel- love, hate, sorrow, happiness, .......... The use of pure and direct language is not to encouring. Make your audience look the text of ur poem very well first, before digesting the poet intended meaning. This can be achived with the use of FIGURE of SPEECH and some other poetic device. If you write poetry, then you need to read more about poetry, you need to read people's poem -not to copy their poem, but to read and have ideas for urself- i am new here, also just starting poetry(Jan2012) .

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