Adam M. Snow
(7/27/2012 4:46:00 PM)
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Through the Eyes of the Untold Lore
Through these stained eyes, dark is all I see
yet I try to live, believing this is me.
But all I could do is place my heart on a page,
and watch it rot away with every age.
All I am through your eyes is a ghost,
whom you don't dare miss the most.
All you are through my eyes, is hopelessness;
but my words I write are my distress.
Peaking through my once soulless muse,
as my heart lies victim to your solemn abuse.
I live to be your puppet, nothing more
but I am a writer of many lore.
And as I dare write with missing heart,
it is with you whom my stories start.
-Adam M. Snow
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(7/24/2012 1:56:00 AM)
I've been writing for quite some time now. It was just a thing of leisure. Now I want to know if poems from the real life pull at heart strings. If not, what can I improve?
(7/23/2012 3:09:00 PM)
The visit (haïku)
One summer morning,
It is the joy of the sun,
I come back see you.
(7/23/2012 7:49:00 AM)
I would appreciate if u guys can cömment and vote on my poems, so as to really knw my stand.it helps you knw
(7/20/2012 2:37:00 PM)
could people read my poems
and tell me what you think about them
(7/19/2012 10:37:00 PM)
REACH FOR YOUR GOAL
PARTICIPATE IN ALL ACTIVITIES
EVERDAY WE TOGETHER MAKES IT BETTER
(7/15/2012 3:56:00 PM)
Hi all, just getting into this and recently posted my first attempt...any criticism is welcome. Scathing or otherwise.
(7/15/2012 3:01:00 PM)
In the twilight
raindrops stopped falling
color of the sky
of the final horizon
(7/11/2012 6:49:00 AM)
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'One can't write poetry unless he knows wat he is writing about' said father of romantics, Wordsworth.so have ur theme set, before writing a poem e.g wat u r writing about and what to write. Express ur feeling by using poetic devices like similie, metaphor and pun etc. Don't get stuck to a particular thing but rather one should specially try to compare things by using similies carefully. Write every thing u know about ur theme and keep following Wordsworth and Keats.
(7/6/2012 1:59:00 AM)
Writing poetry is writing what u feel- love, hate, sorrow, happiness, .......... The use of pure and direct language is not to encouring. Make your audience look the text of ur poem very well first, before digesting the poet intended meaning. This can be achived with the use of FIGURE of SPEECH and some other poetic device. If you write poetry, then you need to read more about poetry, you need to read people's poem -not to copy their poem, but to read and have ideas for urself- i am new here, also just starting poetry(Jan2012) .