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  • Fabian Aryo (1/25/2013 7:57:00 PM) Post reply

    And give me some advice

  • Fabian Aryo (1/25/2013 7:56:00 PM) Post reply

    You feel so much pain....
    You have sense of anger inside you....
    You have desire to revenge....
    and it became a Tremendous Hatred....

    Rate my Poetry

  • Devin Rai (1/25/2013 12:30:00 PM) Post reply

    Hey, Fellow poets, I am Devin Rai, new to this site. I just submitted my poem, " My last five minutes" . It's about regrets and worries you have when your times comes. I hope you all will like it. And feel free to present your views on my poem. It'll will be of great help.

  • Donnaj York (1/24/2013 6:50:00 PM) Post reply

    Brahahahahaha! !

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  • Donnaj York Rookie - 1st Stage (1/18/2013 10:41:00 PM) Post reply

    Jumper - Adventurer - Rock climber
    Rappeller - Parachuter
    Bungee jumper

    Flipping in a curve
    On a country road
    Walker - Toward the light
    In the radiant-resplendence
    Of Heaven

    " Why am I here?- It's too soon
    I've more to do
    Friends and family will be heartbroken"

    " You can go back" , he was told
    " But not to walk, not to feed yourself
    To be dependent for every need"

    " Then I choose to stay - I'll be no burden
    And such constraint would be agony"

    Then the light of Heaven dimmed
    Just so, that looking around
    Himself he found

    Encircled by snowcapped mountains
    Effervescent waterfalls - Crystal lakes

    Among other thrill-seekers
    Who had chosen
    To stay

  • Cynthia L. Baker Rookie - 1st Stage (1/17/2013 12:15:00 PM) Post reply

    I would like to write another poem now

  • Ella Pitt Rookie - 1st Stage (1/17/2013 7:01:00 AM) Post reply

    Would really appreciate it if anybody could take the time to read my latest poems 'Vacuous' and 'Wednesday Night'

  • Arron Fowler Rookie - 1st Stage (1/17/2013 2:12:00 AM) Post reply

    Hey guys i have only just started writing poems i need some more friends to share thoughts with and i need comments on my poems
    check out my new one Theres a Succubuss in my bedroom. Thankyou i will read your poems too NEEEED MORE FRIENDS AHHA.

  • Jinny Kim Rookie - 1st Stage (1/16/2013 6:50:00 PM) Post reply

    I have a new poem called Life, please read and give me your opinion! :)

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