(12/4/2012 4:32:00 AM)
please read my poems on the name juslaine larei and post your comment what you think
(12/4/2012 2:55:00 AM)
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Please am new here and I don't know how to write a poem, can anybody please help me out???????????
(12/2/2012 10:01:00 PM)
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Looking for the realist shit?Read my poems and dont worry I dont curse on any of them, they are just me trying to let people know, they're not alone, because I felt that way for the longest time. But my poems arent perfect so I would really appreciate any tips to make them reach an even deeper level with a nice flow
(12/2/2012 3:05:00 AM)
how to publish my own poet or poem?
(12/2/2012 1:46:00 AM)
Hi fellow poets,
I am back once again and please do read my poems :) I am sure you wont be disappointed. Thanks :)
(12/1/2012 3:47:00 PM)
Pain for Love
What hurts me the most is the fact that i love you
What shocks me the most is why i love you
What supprises me the most is how i love you
What breaks my heart is the fact that im crazy about you
What worries my heart is the truth that i can't change reality
The truth that im stuck on you
Loving you has brought both pain and happiness
I love you that it breaks my heart
Will you take some time to read my poem?
Devon P. John
(12/1/2012 12:22:00 PM)
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Golden uniform, neatly compiled
Vigilant eyes, ears of great size
Sharp white teeth: canine and incisors
Nostrils are small but can scent from miles
Paws of a warrior; nails of razor
A roar of terror alerts the transgressor
Swift and patient: slow to attack
Aggressive and progressive no turning back
Ancient adoration: blood of royalty
Indifferent to defense is an abnormality
Unity with a lion; the love you comprise
A kind of woman i entice
(11/30/2012 9:54:00 AM)
Hello Rachel, I write in spurts as well then go dry as a bone for a day or two.
Like you my poems are short unless on rare occasion I get on a roll.
(11/29/2012 8:56:00 PM)
I have posted some new poems which include " A Round of Applause" , " Clues of Deception" and " Somewhere In-between" . Feel free to comment on them or any of the others honestly. Thanks
(11/29/2012 5:58:00 PM)
I seem to right in spurts. LIke,4 at a time. Or they're short...like this...
we caught fire and watched ourselves burn. with smoke hazed eyes we start to yearn. an irreplaceable time and unwashed place, follow me there and renew my faith.
Wash away the empty pain. Score a fruitless lullaby to soothe and tame. Grin and bear it dear: smile pretty for the camera while this world rips and tears.
I'm not sure why this happens...does anyone else write like this? How can I expand on these???