Jepri Ali Saiful
(5/12/2013 3:41:00 AM)
An angle dove
A dove flies above this trinity’s Buddhist temple
Whom do I have to say to..??
I hope Brahma can change the dove to be an angel
To avoid Siwa to hate to..! !
it is my poem, please give some opinions
(5/11/2013 10:54:00 PM)
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The Black Stallion
By Sophia Engel
Aloft the wind
I ride the night sky
I see the world through a much different eye
Rural, black and Deadly I am
Strength and grace
I feel the spirits of ancestral space
I speak the unspoken word
of mother natures brutal world
And tearing storms
Threatening yet not achieving
To bring me down
Pride of herd
Sisters and brothers
I live ever-watchful standing by others
For threat and danger
We run and gallop
Through wind and rain
A kaleidoscope of colors
Flying through the forest pride
Through nettles, thorn and deadly tide
The short, the tall, the long of mane
No two ever the same
I know the chance
I know the fear
I know the forest ways
I live on the edge
For death crouches near
I feel its breath on my neck
On my back I carry a load
Through storm and calm
Ever vigilant and bold
Strength and bravery rage inside me
Natures will always guide me
Through wind and rain
To high and low
Over cliffs and Mountain tops
I have died in battle twice already
Killed by man
Hunted by predator as I roamed the land
Yet I survive
I take each step with pride
I am ever loyal to those who seek
The free life, the wild life
For I am feral and wild
For I am the Black stallion
The King of the wild
(5/9/2013 2:01:00 PM)
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Discuss ways to improve your poetry.....THIS DOES NOT MEAN POST YOUR POEMS HERE.
Post your techniques, tips, and creative ideas about how to write better....AGAIN, THIS DOES NOT MEAN POST YOUR POEMS HERE.
It is so annoying to see these self obsessed attention seekers destroying these forums.And even more pathetic the few who reply to them and encourage it.
Get help and stop posting ya crap here ffsReplies for this message:
(5/25/2013 8:30:00 AM)
If you don't like a post or the responses to a post, just move on to a post which interests you. Others have a right to post what they want to, as you have a right not to read it and move on. Comment ... more
(5/25/2013 8:16:00 AM)
I guess I have too responses to your post. First of all, if you don't like a particular post and attached comments, don't read it and move on to a post that intrests you. That is basically my respons ... more
(5/10/2013 10:10:00 PM)
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What is worse in my opinion, is that when someone does use the forum for its intended purpose, no one will respond. Is communication a dying, (or dead) , art?
- James Kastner (5/25/2013 8:30:00 AM) Post reply
(5/7/2013 3:55:00 PM)
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I forgot to forget
I remembered to remember
Winter sun sparking your eyes
Setting them alight –
that you spoke
Still etched in your face
for my witness,
Lost in the breeze,
Twirling through the trees,
Dancing in the wind,
As we watched the seasons pass
Coolly unconcerned – by definition,
But the wind blows past
I breathe in the dance
And I forget to forget.
I remember.Replies for this message:
(5/25/2013 8:21:00 AM)
There is a whole lot that is very nice in this poem, the cleverness of the first two lines and the imagery to help the reader understand the abstraction of the emotion. I think it could be tighten up ... more
(5/22/2013 9:47:00 AM)
nice poem Lily. Love this
- James Kastner (5/25/2013 8:21:00 AM) Post reply
(5/7/2013 6:16:00 AM)
Only providence knows what tommorow holds
Only Thy knows whose time it is to leave
Only He knows for how long it would take
Only Thy as the total control
, , , , So Dear, , , , , , , , ,
Would always be with you
Either though times or smooth
Would always be by you side
Either you need me or not
Would always be by your call
Either you say a word or not
Would always stretch an helping hand
Either you need an help or not
Would never make you sad
Either you wrong me or not
Would never make you cry
Either you offend me or not
Would never leave you
Either you here or far away
Saying all this from the depth of my heart
But am not promising
Because am not sure i would wake up tommorow
(4/23/2013 9:01:00 AM)
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Hello everyone I need some help of how could I publish my poems, lyrics and books in here if you can help me please send a massage I would appreciate this if you help me step by step this is solo important for me! ! !
(4/21/2013 4:21:00 AM)
Hey Merry if ever you need any advice I am not the one to ask. It is Midnight Voice - Thomas A Robinson along with Valerie Dohen and Unwritten Soul. These 3 really have something to give to others. Thank You
(4/18/2013 4:51:00 PM)
Thanks Titi so much for your posting. Yes, You are right.
(4/17/2013 8:28:00 AM)
Hello friends, would you say, if you understand the following, which a few bugs and how authentic it sounds, thanks.
What people know, what people know
about a road out of the blue snow.
Oh bro, some say: it's, where the wind always blows,
where Dawn is slow, and it seems now -
it was a long-long time ago.
But in the ghostly mist the lonely star calls go.
What people see, what people see, -
boat leaves the endless empty sea.
His flags dissolved in smoke like passing fantasy.
But even, if in ecstasy,
he confidently promised,
you always knew - the germ is only where the seed.
What people need, what people need,
does not know even the free wind.
And those, who sought, wandered while doing it.
But even our little band also prefers the happy end.
Playing the saw for you we have this country beat.
When all your dealings super good,
sheep eaten by wolves in the woods,
and when now doesn't happens every bullshit,
train rides between the angry clouds,
and all of what you'll never know,
remained in place, you will not see until the need.
(4/17/2013 5:56:00 AM)
How could I love love, if love has never loved me. I am in bed alone and I cannot sleep, I am just fixing my memories by changing reality. El amor siempre Es rojo, y el cielo es muy palido.... Pero yo deseo verles por deseo y no antojo.