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  • Rookie Abdul Basit (7/10/2006 11:18:00 PM) Post reply | Read 3 replies
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    sup ppl..m a newcomer not in poetry..just in here well ive bn writing for not much long but still my poems suck, well the problem with them is that they arent omplex, they are too basic like a 7 year old kid scribbled sum poems....i wanna make em luk complex, deep, compelling the reader to read it few more times to understand completely..if any gud poet like ta help me sort my weaknesses i wud very much appreciate that,


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    • Rookie Ernest Mayer (7/14/2006 11:25:00 PM) Post reply

      i wouldn't worry. your stuff is pretty good.

    • Rookie Eddie Loughran (7/12/2006 6:36:00 AM) Post reply

      I don't think your poems 'suck'! If you aren't happy with them, work on them ultil you are, and don't post them until they are up to your standards. But I still like them!

    • Rookie Richard Cock III (7/11/2006 1:18:00 PM) Post reply

      your stuff ain't bad. your just going through mad shit right now. just keep on writing.

  • Rookie Maddi Eden (7/10/2006 1:47:00 PM) Post reply

    Hey Everyone!
    I'm new to poemhunter.com, and I have added nine poems I've written over the last six weeks.
    I'd really appreciate it if you could read, and comment, on them

  • Rookie Mathew Lewis (7/7/2006 6:15:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Hey guys and girls. I know this isn't technically what this page is about but I've just posted a poem called Angel eyes and I'd really appreciate you reading it. I dont know if its any good but its about something really close to my heart and it would be great if you could comment on it. Thanks all.

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    • Rookie Aldo Kraas (1/26/2007 8:27:00 PM) Post reply

      The angel eye poem is amazing It is very deep BY reading the poem I can see that you ar very romantic And like company Also you like angels

  • Rookie Red Blooded Black Hearted (6/26/2006 9:22:00 PM) Post reply

    Hey all! ! ! ! I only started on poemhunter this year and am still a baby on poem writing. I was wondering if u all could help me, all or most o my poems are rhymes and I was wondering of any techniques on writing without rhyme.

    Hugs, Rissa: -)

  • Rookie Dana Tyrrell (6/26/2006 7:24:00 PM) Post reply

    hello all.
    ive been having a bit of a draught of fresh ideas and inspiration for new poems...can anyone help?

  • Rookie Richard Cock III (6/26/2006 1:07:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Posted some new stuff. Have a look, if you DARE...

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    • Rookie Aldo Kraas (1/26/2007 8:38:00 PM) Post reply

      All the title for your poems are horrible You send the wrong message The message that i get is that You don't know right from wrong The poem Old lady should be title Senior or Elder You don't ha ... more

  • Rookie Tamara Moir (6/25/2006 4:51:00 AM) Post reply

    Hello, I just put a poem on this site, and I was wondering if anyone would mind reading it and giving me some feedback? It is called 'Jealousy Got The Best Of Her'

    http: //www.poemhunter.com/p/m/poem.asp? poet=101568&poem=3690835

    Thank-you in advance

  • Rookie Untitiled and unnamed (6/25/2006 12:48:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Hey All...

    Do any of you listen to music as you write your work? ? I find that it helps to listen to tracks from, Enigma, Robert Miles, Enya, when I'm sad, Faith No More and other metal groups when I am angry and fustrated...

    Would love to hear your thoughts if music influences your work...?

    Keep up the good work everyone as I do enjoy reading it,

    God bless, and take care,


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    • Rookie Richard Cock III (6/25/2006 1:05:00 PM) Post reply

      i need music to influence me in practically anything. be it writing, or just having the guts to face yet another tough ass day. i listen to FNM too by the way...

  • Rookie Dana Tyrrell (6/23/2006 10:52:00 AM) Post reply

    new poems all,
    #1-] Razorblade Tango
    #2-] 3: 49 pm
    #3-] Love's Duplicity

    check them out, love 'em, comment 'em, etc...

  • Rookie Fasika Ayalew (6/22/2006 4:04:00 AM) Post reply

    Need help with the other types of poems other than the rhymed one

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