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  • Fritzgerald Paul (4/10/2007 11:18:00 PM) Post reply

    people read my poems and tell me what do you think

  • Dylan Barker (4/6/2007 5:22:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    I need people to read my poems. it would be very helpful. thank you.

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  • Stephen Denny Paul White (4/6/2007 3:56:00 PM) Post reply

    At least check out my poems: (

  • Stephen Denny Paul White (4/6/2007 3:47:00 PM) Post reply

    Got tons of poems on another website, and I'm trying out this website... so if you could comment and keep me here, I would appreciate it!

  • Dylan Barker (4/5/2007 8:53:00 AM) Post reply

    Hey, would you guys read poems by me?

  • Isaias Rendon (4/3/2007 11:20:00 AM) Post reply

    Can you people please comment on my poems and ways to improve them. Such as techniques, tips, and other creative ideas please. thank you

  • Hannah Chiz (3/30/2007 4:11:00 PM) Post reply

    Hey, I'm 15 years old, and I'd really like a chance to impress some more experienced writers and get my stuff noticed!

    I have an intense passion for words, and I have developed a unique style through combining my love of para-rhymes (a style used in hiphop) without sacrificing the meaning of the poem.

    My poems are all pretty intense, and I have loaded two onto the system.
    I would greatly appreciate some opinions or comments, critical or otherwise.
    I will return the favour!
    Thankyou for your reading time

    Hannah x

  • Brandi Cuff (3/30/2007 9:15:00 AM) Post reply

    Hi my name is Brandi and I strongly agree with giving poems an intresting name as a matter of fact I thought of that as well. I would really appreciate it if you wii give me constructive crticism on my poems. Please be completely honest. Thanks so much in advance!

  • Oni Hayes (3/16/2007 10:24:00 AM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

    Try to come up with enticing Titles for your poems. To be honest when I am looking at poems to read I pass by some great poems because the titles are ordinary. The more Intriguing, the more viewers. On that note when reading poetry look at the poems with simpler titles as well.

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    • Stug Jordan (3/28/2007 12:10:00 PM) Post reply

      Do you ever get the trouble of thinking up a brilliant title, but not having the right words to put under it? I agree with your idea. A title is a synopsis, advertisment and (sometimes) a poem all in ... more

    • Garret Schuelke (3/27/2007 11:33:00 PM) Post reply

      Agreed, though at times a 'mild' title is the best way to describe a poem.

  • Oni Hayes (3/16/2007 10:11:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    I really need constructive critisim on my poems so,
    tell me which needs improving or changes.

    I would greatly appreciate the favor
    OB.H

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    • Red Blooded Black Hearted (3/22/2007 9:37:00 PM) Post reply

      I always find it difficult to give constructife criticism or any type of criticism when it comes to any type of art. Because true art is in the eye of the beholder, there may be a poem out there that ... more

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