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  • Rookie KaleZzer chEesE (10/17/2007 6:44:00 PM) Post reply
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    heres like a song im workin on it has 2 do with a couple weeks ago when the shooting happend @ the highschool: : : :

    you thing your life is the worst one
    you dont know how to act apon
    all these mindless humanless thoughts
    it didnt stop after the first shot

    **CHORES**
    bang bang
    you shot me down
    bang bang
    i hit the ground
    bang bang, bang bang
    bang bang
    im screaming for help
    bang bang
    you asult ur self
    bang bang
    theres no one else

    you continued to murder our souls
    as we tried to grab ahold
    take our last breath
    say our last words
    hope we had no regrets
    and only a happily ever after

    **CHORES**
    bang bang
    you shot me down
    bang bang
    i hit the ground
    bang bang, bang bang
    bang bang
    im screaming for help
    bang bang
    you asult ur self
    bang bang
    theres no one else

    this life was a worthless one
    and in the end you shoot your self with a gun
    call it murder, call it suicidle
    it dont matter, no ones IDLE

    **CHORES**
    bang bang
    you shot me down
    bang bang
    i hit the ground
    bang bang, bang bang
    bang bang
    im screaming for help
    bang bang
    you asult ur self
    bang bang
    theres no one else.......

    [{(i got the BANG BANG fro mthe song BANG BANG lol tell me what u think) }]

  • Rookie Goldy Locks (10/10/2007 4:45:00 PM) Post reply

    September 06,2007

    LADIES AND GENTLEMEN, MR. LEONARD COHEN.

    Poetry is not
    an occupation but a verdict.

    “Caveat emptor” the poet writes
    on the bathroom wall.

    He teaches us to stay awake
    in the presence of so many plastic surgeons,
    that live off collagen
    and ignore the silence
    of stones.

    As long as I keep searching for words
    I will not sleep,
    my spirit will rebel
    it will protest against that inferior death,
    such a foolish tradition.

    Some day I too wish to become
    another recluse of Hydra,
    forever caged in its long hairs,
    its delta eyes.

    —Flor Aguilera

  • Rookie Mychal Phillip Sajulga (10/9/2007 9:11:00 AM) Post reply

    Well, I seem to have an edge whenever I am in trance. Some find it on drinking, like the famous gree fair, absinthe. I can achieve trance like state through sleep deprivation.

  • Rookie Heather Ferguson (10/8/2007 2:34:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    how do I write when i don't feel it? What formation do I use fo ra poem?

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  • Rookie Timothy Mercurio (10/7/2007 9:39:00 AM) Post reply

    i once was disabled to not to be able to discover a light for that i can night!
    i once fell down to something thats brown what can i see i dare not believe!
    how can there be so much hate when hate is just a four letter word for that i must relate for that i can name so many other hatred that exist in a date that just cant seem to relate

  • Rookie José Chapa (10/4/2007 4:38:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    To follow in the footsteps of Sartre, I ask: ¿do you actually have anything to say?

    If you do, you should probably write prose.

    (General advice, I just read some really interesting Sartre essays.)

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    • Rookie José Chapa (10/4/2007 4:39:00 PM) Post reply

      Ahh, mind the '¿'. English is not my first language, well, it kinda is but not really.

  • Rookie Apple Shepherd (9/28/2007 10:43:00 PM) Post reply

    *Fortunate One*

    www.poemhunter.com/poem/fortunate-one/

    Thanks for taking the time...

  • Rookie David Corman (9/23/2007 8:37:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Everyone, delet you poetry and restart. Pass the message It must be done.

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  • Rookie Zia Jaycee May Trent (9/21/2007 8:37:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    I love to write poetry because it releases your thoughts; don't think about what you are doing, just write. Also, don't force yourself to, try to write when you are relaxed....comment on my poems please, i love feedback... http: //www.poemhunter.com/zia-jaycee-may-trent/

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  • Rookie Clay Scott (9/21/2007 12:11:00 PM) Post reply

    hi my name is clay im new to the site i was wantin some feedback on my poetry so im here askin if yall will look at it and tell me ur oppions thank you http: //www.poemhunter.com/clay-scott/

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