(7/17/2008 12:23:00 PM)
Read my poems Write honest comments and how to improve my
(7/15/2008 6:12:00 AM)
I would like to get some piece of advice on how to obtain a more surreal/ethereal feel on my poems. It's quite hard to obtain an airy effect in poetry since you still have to use words... freeform poems with random/made up words would be a good idea, but it could be very hard to convey emotion on paper.
Anyway, feel free to check out my poems (sorry for the shameless plug) if you're into more surreal poetry...
Best regards from Romania,
(7/11/2008 2:54:00 PM)
Please stop by my profile and read some of my stuff, I love feedback so criticize me lol
Thank you all
(7/9/2008 10:33:00 AM)
I'm new to this site, i could use some feedback on my poems. so yeah feel free to come check them out, i think i'm pretty good. :)
(7/6/2008 5:16:00 AM)
O.k well i havent been able to sleep right for like a month and a few days
and i think its cause so much stuff is going on in my life.
I Broke my foot aday after school got out.The girl i like is going out with some other dude, this other girl i like(i no im bad =P) is really pretty and i see her and i cant like do anything..
BUT i really cannot wright poetry at all and i think thats like the only way i can get how i feel out...So if anyone could help me that would be nice =) and it would help alot...feel free to email at this really lame email address lol
(7/4/2008 8:17:00 PM)
I dunno I got like ninteen posts but few comments
check out my stuff please tell me if u enjoy
ill comment back
Shame Provoked secrecy
(7/2/2008 6:56:00 PM)
Sorry i am new to this. i know i am drifting a little out of the context of this conversation area but i don't suppose anyone knows how to put a setting on my page that won't allow it to come up on search engines? I really dont mind people on here reading my poetry, i like it and feel blessed that people would want to finish them but i really dont like the idea of my family or freinds being able to find them. They are a very personal and pretty detailed description on my state of mind and i wouldnt want anyone who knows me to read them.Sorry i sound like a crazy person but i need to get it off google! can anyone help?
(7/1/2008 9:32:00 AM)
Hi, im new to this site and havent been writing for to long, if anyone wants to check out what i have written and leave me comments or messages on how to improve that would be great! !
(6/30/2008 2:37:00 PM)
Hi, i would really like to have my newest poem. I wrote this for a good freind, and put a lot of time into it....I just really want to know what fellow poets think
(6/26/2008 5:19:00 AM)
READ MY BLASPHEMY AND YOU'LL UNDERSTAND WHY YOU SHOULDNT BE APPREHENSIVE..