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  • Rookie Michael Smith (2/6/2009 11:13:00 AM) Post reply
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    This One Is Off The Top.
    So I need some criticism.

    Now is my time.
    Time for the world to see a new man.
    Out with the frale & lonely guy.
    It's time to take a stand.
    March through a valley of bravery.
    With a torch of confidence in my hand.
    Holding it up high.
    Bringing glory to my Newfoundland.
    Proposing a strength so merciful & strong.
    So uplifting & graceful.
    The feeling of a king.
    The torch remains warm.
    Longing the coming of a being so new.
    Keep the bravado up high.
    Lift up my torch to my sky yet so blue.

    Be Honest.
    And be sure to comment some of my poems.

  • Rookie Susie Sunshine (2/5/2009 5:29:00 PM) Post reply

    If anyone wants to buy my book. Go to Cafepress.com It's my first book of poems. Now I am working on my second book of poems. I am really excited about it. Susie Sunshine

  • Rookie Nicholas Spandrel [Enjoys Writing Poetry] (2/2/2009 12:01:00 PM) Post reply

    Please read and comment my poems for i am new at this i have added a new poem The battle of my life
    Nicholas Spandrel

  • Veteran Poet - 4,978 Points Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (2/2/2009 9:17:00 AM) Post reply

    I have been very busily inspired by my Muse and I have added new haiku to my collection titled RAINBOW IN MOTION HAIKU.I think it may be the best poem I ever wrote.And it is my favorite so far.Let me know what you think and enjoy its uplifting universal message. There is something for everyone in my series.Thank you! ! ! ! ! !

    Haiku are not that easy to write because of the syllable scheme and required impact.Hope my collection inspires or leaves you with lasting impressions.
    Have a nice day! ! ! ! ! !

  • Rookie Matt Turner (1/29/2009 10:34:00 PM) Post reply

    If you're interested in the bizzare, check out my unique poems, I promise you they will be like nothing you've read before.

  • Rookie Nicholas Spandrel [Enjoys Writing Poetry] (1/29/2009 11:36:00 AM) Post reply

    Revenge sweet as Red wine

    Ah the sound of revenge as blood pours from the enemy’s heart
    Into my wineglass like sweet red wine
    As the music sounds with laughter dark as the night sky
    As I take a drink and love the sweet taste of their blood
    As dark as bloods delight
    I am like Vlad Dracul a terror of the night and day
    As blood flows into my glass as I await the sweetest taste
    Of blood red wine in the day and the night
    For victims beware my lust for blood
    For I am everywhere
    I am the blood red sky and the lunar eclipse.

  • Rookie Nikkie C (1/29/2009 10:50:00 AM) Post reply

    Hey I just started to show my poems to people so please comment

  • Rookie Shawn O'connor (1/28/2009 7:44:00 AM) Post reply

    any 1 who is interested in hearing a love poem please check out my first poem and please rate what you think

  • Rookie - 3 Points Trade Martin (1/28/2009 1:36:00 AM) Post reply

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  • Rookie Shiblee Shahed (1/22/2009 4:27:00 AM) Post reply

    HI all........
    i am too much eager to know the actual history behind Haiku.....
    anything new about it.... what will we say the guys who used to write haiku ``Haikuist``? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

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