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  • Emperor 8 (9/9/2008 8:05:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    please check my new poem 'beautiful day' i really need ur comments on it, i will be very happy if u guys will check it, so please do, thnx

  • Maria Isabel Oropeza (9/8/2008 9:39:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    Hello everyone. Please check out my poetry and leave comments. I would greatly appreciate this. Currently, I have no new poetry, but rest assured, there will be some coming shortly. Thanks.
    Be Different. Be You.
    Elizabeth deSpain

  • Mario Gonzalez (9/7/2008 10:56:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    Hi. I am new and I really would want an honest review of my poems and some pointers if you have them. If anyone is up for it, PLEASE!
    thanks,
    Mario

  • Linda Winchell (9/6/2008 4:00:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    Would some of you poets go and read a few of mine? I seem to be getting a lot of slack from a teacher that posts on the forum. I don't think mine are that bad. Thanks!

  • Emily Oldham (9/6/2008 1:04:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply Stage

    Hi can you lot comment on my new poems please?
    Thanks! :)
    Athena

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    • Linda Winchell (9/6/2008 4:10:00 PM) Post reply Stage

      I went and read some of your poems. I like the one, After the rain. Great use of words.

  • Dan Gregory (9/3/2008 4:35:00 PM) Post reply | Read 2 replies Stage

    hi, im new here anyone wanna read my poems and give me some tips?

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    • Linda Winchell (9/6/2008 4:52:00 PM) Post reply Stage

      Read your work and it is out of this world good! Keep it up! Remember if you start with a rhyme you must continue that way. Good Luck!

    • Linda Winchell (9/6/2008 4:45:00 PM) Post reply Stage

      I will Dan. I'll email you my ideas if I have any. God Bless, Linda

  • Olumide Ayodele (9/3/2008 5:04:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply Stage

    hello! since the heart is not governed by earthly rules, why follow costumed rules such as rhymes, rhythms, feets while writing.it makes ones poem seem overdressed from my point of view.

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    • Tulsi Hanumanthu (9/21/2008 2:47:00 AM) Post reply Stage

      But, don't you think that being 'overdressed' is much better than being 'underdressed' or 'naked'?

  • Prashant Dhawan (9/1/2008 1:40:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply Stage

    Rage

    ‘Rage’ an utterly disputed word in my mind
    Is rage anger or an inner force?
    Rage conquered my mind
    Rage is the only thing left in me now

    Rage can be felt by both soul and the body
    Rage dwells in the cave of failure
    Rage creates an abysm in your heart
    Rage cannot be tamed

    Rage is felt on losing
    Rage is felt on guilt
    Rage is felt on rejection
    Rage is felt due to competitor’s superiority

    I accommodated rage in my heart
    I accumulated my disappointments in it
    I now am a slave to this rage
    I have abetted this rage

    I have abided this rage for several years
    I have kept it in side me
    In the fear that this rage might hurt my dear ones
    But soon it will be released and will find another body to continue the rage

    Prashant’s Rage

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  • Existential Despair (8/31/2008 5:15:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    Poesies are a chance for the heart to speak what it's been screaming from the inside

  • Meysam Koushafar (8/31/2008 11:16:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    please give me your comment about my poems. thanks in advance.

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