Alot of feeling and true life events in your poem. It must have been quite difficult in some parts to write. Amazing how you stayed as the one orphan. Very impresive poem and well done.look forward to your next one. keep up the great writing.
Interesting style the way you play with rhyme, reminds me of dada poems which does not sems to make too much sense but actually makes lots of sense.
POETS HAVE ONE THING IN COMMON. LOVE FOR THE PEOPLE AND THEY ARE LIKE SOLDIERS IN WAR.THEY RESCUE EACH OTHER, HELP EACH OTHER AND DIE FOR THE WHOLE COMMUNITY.THANK YOU FOR BEING A POET.
Your poem was full of emotion and i enjoyed reading it very much ^^ but the unneccessary capital words somewhat forced your message in a way of a turn off. Since this poem has a great and powerful message, you did a very impressive job in setting forth emotion to bring this piece alive. =)
your writing is so gracious and full of understanding...you leave me speechless as always with your amazing imagery that inspires me^^
Ihave read it again and again itis very beutifull, very nice...... and reserves 10++++++++
a woman who is facing huge problems that men cannot face........and fighting powerful fights that men cannot fight in........slaps, stabs and hurts bad guys.......she's a monster infront of bad guys...but a flower spreading it's scent among her friends and good guys........very sweet arabic woman very helpful and hospitable.......and a great poetess indeed...God bless her
Watchiful eyes guiding you this is the poem I will read all the time from the time I first read it.Its quite good
From: Mubeen Sadhika (India ;) To: TAMARA HANARING Date Time: 7/29/2009 6: 49: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: KISSES OF THE THUNDER... Most of your poems are awesome. I simply love them. You have magical, magnetic mesmerizing poetry in you. It'll be an honour for me if you read any of my new poems of your choice and send your comments. Thanks Mubeen.
Ok....I believe poets, should write to inpire, and change lives........ I hope you remember this.......Hey, sorry if I said negative words to you.... I believe......we poet shouldn't focus on the ratings...... Keep it up and continue to write..... I will be watching.......to be nice........
I thank God I read your poem. So inspiring to me as the new one in this site. Please help me rate my poems too so I can be guided by the princess of the poet. Thanks.
Congratulations on a written master piece! ! It really shows every body your talented mind.Keep up the good work!
masha2allahhhhhhh.... now... you are Tamara shakespeare or Tamara al Motanabi....Einstein of the poetry in the 21 century.... it is really.........
READ IT.THANK YOU FOR THE INVITE, THAT POEM REALLY BRIGHTENED ME UP, AS SO I GOT UP TO READ A LITTLE MORE, N WRITE.10S. BESIDES IN THE MIDDLE, N FIGHTING TIMES, I JUST FINISHED 6ACTS/ROLES..DO ME THE HONOR OF BEING THE 1ST 2 READ EM
Tamara I read and think you are a great person that I could have met in my lifetime...that is done as we meet on the street of poemhunter.