Hi Soumita........you write very beautifully indeed. I enjoyed reading both A Canvas of Failure and Bye Aishu: the former for the sadness of relentless adversity and the latter for its poignancy. May i also request that you try to wade through my didactic poem, Verses on the *Universe. It describes the birth and death of our Universe and the trillions of years in- between. I tried to keep it poetic though it reaches the frontiers of contemporary scientific knowledge. Perhaps you might also glance through the humorous ones like Cossipore & the Migress, A Bus Ride in Kolkata etc, etc.. Thanks and let me know what you feel.
Brave and Strong........ A teachers PEN should always be like that...... grrt Shakti rup naari, har yudh ki tayari.. moh, rag, dwesh ko katti ek kattari.... ghan ghor samar, kalam amar, kagaj ki ranbhoomi, dharm yudh, karam yukt, sacchai ki bayari..... shakti rup, nari rup, har yudh ki tayari