Hey young one.. you are an excellent writer.. really are.
Your poems are by far one of the best I've seen of any Poet your age. I am indeed impressed and absolutely startled by your attempts so far. Beautiful writes! Keep at it and I won't be surprised to find collections of your poems in bookshops 5 years from now. Well Done Ms Munden!
I can tell you are a good writer just by the passion you put on display. Surely you will one day be able to write a poout anything without even trying! As soon as you feel happy, just write down your feelings and why you feel that way. Later you can change it into a poem.
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