Hi Sally, I chose a poem of yours at random - 1957 - “…kohl-eyed, black lashed Saturday morning spenders” ‘Good God’ I thought …were you there? ’ Straight back to the ‘Riviera’ and ‘Elasona’ coffee bars and the local ‘Plaza’ on Saturday nights. Another couple - ‘Aunt Rose’ you say is kid’s stuff - we were all kids at one time and ‘Seagull’ - how often we fail to notice the things we frequently see. Great work.
Yes the universety of life of which I am one also gd to read your poems. I hav been writing poetry myself for about 20 years untill recently didnt know they were any good. Now I realise and now it flows.
Most Respected Madam, I have posted few poems, if possible please read once my poem bcoz your comments shall be more valuable than my poems with kind regards ramesh rai rkrai100@gmail.com
great work sally. and thank you 4 commenting on my page. you are truly a great woman!
strange how the small poems have the biggest effect.....scattering words around the rim of my mind :)
wow so many poems which is your favourite? ... please read my birthday song..
Very versatile thinker........
It is a lovely comment. Thankyou