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The days when you were right beside me
The sailing boat is what we used to see
The feel of your presence never dies
Your love sticks to my cheeks, lips and eyes
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great its just unique, please collect the space on NO MATTER or is it one word?
thats fantastic its very good i like your rhyming cuplets the whole poem is fantastic xtamara
your live sticks to my cheeks, lips and eyes, i find that cute. quite a different way of expressing your feelings. not too mushy. keep writing yoy ate very young and with time your poems can be more profound.
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6/17/2025 6:58:14 PM # 1.0.0
this is good! I like it!