What shall I say?
When you're in my thoughts
All night and day.
Like a candle on mantelpiece
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For I have a fragile heart, A heart of ceramic, Though cracked and sealed So often with glue Still dreams to be the queen on the rue! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! --------------- Strange feeling of love & passion, very poetic.......Nice reading..
a fragile heart, true... but an agile mind that can say so beautiful things...'like a candle on mantlepiece....' captivating warmth of intellect mingled with the passionate heat of love-feelings....all encased in choicest diction...
A refreshing, romantic river that flows over its bank whit beauty. Well done my friend! 10/10
so, what shall i say? ...my gosh, this is well expressed dear..
What shall I say? Your words captivate me. My, do I love reading this piece.
On white sands of beaches, and angels in heaven Orchestrated in choirs Just singing your sweet name Rachel Ann Butler
Indeed, this is a master piece and love can be justified in anything, if seen with imagination
well..what else can i say, ..this is beautiful sweetie..your lovely flow of words are amazing. Love you, Anj.. Meg
for such a romance my tears fall as just a dropp of water in a endless sea Beautiful 10++++++and a sigh
Beautiful and romantic. Full of wonder and emotion. Nicely written with great descriptive, choices of words. Fit together to make a very interesting piece. DC
very, very, very amazing piece.. written with all your heart... words went out dancing with love...superb expressions.. .I love this...as always.. your work can makes us imagine that great love, too... 10++++ lovelots, Maia
Anjali, you have put your heart and soul in it with your choicest similes, metaphors and musical diction. Awesome, I have to borrow from John Keats: 'Ah, happy, happy boughs! that cannot shed Your leaves, nor ever bid the Spring adieu; And, happy melodist, unwearied, For ever piping songs for ever new; More happy love! more happy, happy love! For ever warm and still to be enjoyed, For ever panting and for ever young; All breathing human passion far above, That leaves a heart high-sorrowful and cloyed, A burning forehead, and a parching tongue.' CP
Hmmmmmm. This one steals the heart away.the reader gets swept the imagery and metaphors.....only a few can write so romantically....gud one
wowwwwwwwwwwwww with lots of w s... this one got usual Anjali Sinha's flavor all over it... Hey did you wrote from personal xp... I mean first person..mmmmmmm anyway this is very touching and heart felt poem Anju, .... And I liked the way you compare and contrast things... this is good! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! after a long time, a true love poem by angelic anju! ! ! ! with lots of love to you... shan
Exquisite, Anjali.Superb use of simile and metaphor. 10/10. As always, Sandra
Dear Anju, YOU'RE ALWAYS IN MY HEART ALL THE TIME YOU GIVE ME INSPIRATION TO WRITE SOMETHING YOU ARE MY MUSE WHEN I READ YOUR POEM I'M CONFUSE SHE IS A LADY WHOSE NAME WRIT IN POEM HUNTER.COM
What shall I do? Lord, What shall I do? For I have a fragile heart, A heart of ceramic, Though cracked and sealed So often with glue Still dreams to be the queen on the rue! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! liked these lines very much may ur wishes be fulfilled. thank u.