Will You Love Me Till The End Of Time? Poem by Saane Pahulu

Saane Pahulu

Saane Pahulu

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Will You Love Me Till The End Of Time?

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will you love me till the end of time?
for better or for worse
knowing that your mine?
i'll always put you first...
i carry you in my heart
no matter where i go
we'll never be apart
my love, thats the only thing i know!
oh, hold me tight
with your strong embrace
we'll never lose the fight
that, i see in your face.
so here i stand
waiting for my soul mate..
i giv eyou my hand
reminising our final last date
for this, i give you my soul
forever as one
no longer and empty hole
all of this, that i have done,
i have done only for you...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jean Dament 15 September 2009

A sweet, love poem that was nicely done. You have a few errors here though. In the title you forgot the 'e' in end. Not sure what word you meant to use in the line 'we'll never lose the foght' (fight?)

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