Monday, August 24, 2015

Who Am I Comments

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If you are mirror see a mirror in me.
Placed in front of each other,
making a number of images,
you have seen this show,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Kelly Kurt 24 August 2015

I love the brilliant touches of science you infuse poems with. Yes, at a basic level, what you see in others; parenthood, friendship, love, desire, hope, is what is mirrored in all men, yet, WHO is an unanswerable question, asked by the unnamed. When we are all on even ground in the glory of eternity, we can mutually decide. But then, the question will be even more meaningless, as we will all be one. Peace

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 August 2015

I never met you and I will never meet you. We shall meet on the Day of Judgment, There we’ll decide mutually, Who are we? ........Really judgment will bw finalised at the end who are we? Marvellous expression. Thanks for sahring......10

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Ammu Sachariah 24 August 2015

good poem. you mean so much to us as a poet

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Khalida Bano Ali 24 August 2015

What a lovely write........................................10

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