Whimsical Desires On Valentine's Day Comments

When life takes an obliterating course, When suddenly the night closes over And dangers prowl around us like carnivores beasts, How I wish we could still remain one in spirit and soul And the vagrant fate or the wanton death Could never separate us, you and me! .....so touching and impressive with a nice theme. Beautiful poem nicely executed.10

Nice one Valsa...Thanks for sharing

One of the loveliest valentine poems I have ever read! Beautiful words weaving through each romantic scene. It is overwhelming! Thank you.

A superb poem woven with threads of rich imagery that offers a vista of romantic scenes.

ohh a superb melodious romantic poem! absolutely loved it! as i got drenched and lost in every line of romance...

In my observation the cycle of time has enough mettle to make one fancy on.... it is a little whimsical for a certain reason though. It is a fantastic poem, Valsa madam

You have gone romantic like the Southern Bay on this Valentine's Day. Loved the downpour imagery and emotions, Valsa-ji. Also, remembered Amitabh Bachchan and Smita Patil dancing in sheer abandon in the rains on Bombay's Marine Drive. Forgot the name of that old movie - may be Namak Halal. (10)

Groovy writing especially for a valentine's Day. Many thanks madam.

Great imagery scripted with so much loving words really makes it eternal.....Valsa.....love is such a word that on this whatever composition has been made or is made or will be made looks like an ounce of water from the ocean, it has the scope to go beyond the universe.......and I am reminded a line of Emily Dickinson's poem where She said love is anterior to life and posterior to death is rightly said.....anyway I always love your composition....10

Beautifully written with vivid imagery, I felt like a voyeur on your - you and me.; 0)

And dangers prowl around us like carnivores beasts, How I wish we could still remain one in spirit and soul And the vagrant fate or the wanton death Could never separate us, you and me! It's amazing, a beautiful poem..........................10

Let love flourish only a breath away. Every scene in the poem brings the lovers together and expresses the desire to remain close. Beautiful lines. Enjoyed. Happy Valentine's Day.