Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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Aniruddha Pathak
Godhra - Gujarat
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Saturday, August 15, 2020

Where Would In Time Its Footprints Go? Comments

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Parting cuckoo where her calls go?
Cut off from coast where sea would go?

Unfolding time dies duly blurred,
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A beautiful poem amazingly crafted. Everything has a place to go. It is called the Time...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 August 2020

Everything happens and we witness the scene and hear the tune of chirping of birds including singing of cuckoo. But after few says everything changes due to seasonal changing. Many natural footprints we see and keep in memory but in reality these go away. An amazing poem is well penned.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 August 2020

" If breath ceases with spoken word, How farther would the echoes go." Wonderful lines from a great poem. To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 August 2020

A very touching and deeply poignant write. Wonderful poetic expressions that convey thoughts to ponder about. Liked how this poem has been presented. The great Poet's recurring words in every stanza enhanced the beauty of this magnificent poem.

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Varsha M 16 August 2020

Where would in time the footprints go.... Nowhere but covered with past Until someone upturns Dawning my day. Beautiful write. Thank-you Sir for your prescious comments.

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Bharati Nayak 16 August 2020

Parting cuckoo where her calls go? Cut off from coast where sea would go? Unfolding time dies duly blurred, Where would the vicissitudes go? If breath ceases with spoken word, How farther would the echoes go? - - - - An amazingly beautiful write !

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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 August 2020

A magnificent poetic expression. Truly brilliant and excellent....10++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 August 2020

A fabulous Ghazal sir! Loved reading it.....10/10

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Rajnish Manga 16 August 2020

If breath ceases with spoken word, How farther would the echoes go? .... //.... These are some of the most legitimate queries that may arise in the mind of a man at the crossroads of life which goes on uninterrupted on the surface while the questions of philosophical nature continue to churn human consciousness. Thanks, Aniruddha Sir.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 15 August 2020

An elegant meaningful poem.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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