When It Comes To You Comments

I believe in this Poem u where too forward, and u tried too hard for us to understand were you are coming from and going. i believe u underestimated ur audience. 'My heart gallops like a horse in a race' Lets take this phrase for example, The word GALLOPS gives u picture that something or someone is in a particular motion, then the IN A RACE restricted our imagination and shows too much emphasis. If you were to look at the entire Poem, it is overly explanatory. Firstly, the title says to me its a conversation between the two, no need to single out everytime the YOU and I till to the end. Further than that its ok.