Tuesday, October 23, 2018

What Is It? Comments

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The one which is apparent and hidden as well
It is close to my heart, yet far from being present
When I touch, it rolls up
And when I concur, it disagrees.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Muzahidul Reza 25 October 2018

It is; yes, It is, and you have to find out, a riddle like, thanks for sharing,10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 October 2018

A philosophical thirst of knowledge is well narrated through questions. It roams like a butterfly and it smiles without reason. Without any cause it brings tear. This is strong emotion that carries fragrance. This is an excellent poem...10

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M Asim Nehal 26 October 2018

Thank u so much Kumarmani Ji

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M Asim Nehal 26 October 2018

Thx Much Sir....

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 October 2018

Love and art! Carries the fragrance in the air! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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M Asim Nehal 24 October 2018

Thx Much Mr. Edward

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Kelly Kurt 23 October 2018

It is a subjective intangible. It is often recognized intuitively, but not easily defined.

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M Asim Nehal 24 October 2018

Thx Much My friend Kelly.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 October 2018

Apartment of life is close to heart. Tender mind roams like butterfly. Poetic mind perceives everything. In thirsty mid drinking nectar of wisdom is great. An interesting poem is beautifully penned.10

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