Sunday, June 30, 2013

What Drugs Will Do To You Comments

Rating: 4.7

They will show you
distorted images
of what you can become
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Dave Alan Walker
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Kevin Patrick 27 July 2013

Great indictment Mr. Walker, with great metaphors to contextualize the horrors of an addictive substance. A message for addicts trapped in the chase of the leopard that eats them

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Patricia Grantham 22 July 2013

Illegal drugs can destroy communities and uproot families. They can put you in a trance so high you feel you can't come down or you don't know how to get down from it! Stay far away from it and keep it out of your lives. No good comes from it. Very inspiring write.

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Ken E Hall 18 July 2013

The poets concerns are spelt out here, sadly drugs the never ending saga is the death of many but the (your) message must be never ending...regards

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Ken E Hall 18 July 2013

I agree with your every word sadly its a never ending saga, your concerns are spelt out in the poem truth...regards PS my last abode in Leeds Templegate Ave Templenewsam!

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Juan Olivarez 17 July 2013

A false sense of well being. So well stated.

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Vipins Puthooran 10 July 2013

drugs are good for treating many symptoms but not for making fun)))) a good poem! ! !

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Babatunde Aremu 04 July 2013

There is no other better way to say it, drug ruins. A word is enough for the wise. Nive job

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Kevin Halls 02 July 2013

Thanks for your comment to my Hangover poem. Which echoes your one! I've been around long enough to see what drink and drugs can do, it ain't pretty Dave. Good poem.

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Gajanan Mishra 02 July 2013

good message to all, thanks.

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R.j. Wynn 01 July 2013

Awesome told truth as it is. I also rattle.

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David Wood 01 July 2013

I rattle a bit with what the doctor gives me! ! Another good write Dave

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