Lovely pottery
Just for cookery
She bought one
To try
She cooked
Something delicious
He commented
'Uncooked pot'
She's broken
Into shards
But he commented differently....a silly comment dear madam.
Beautiful poem, dear Ma'm. Women are so fond of exquisite pottery. To cook a delicious recipe in the lovely pot is an art. A careless comment from a man can shatter the whole endeavour. I would have loved to taste this dish...... :) ......top stars. Thank you for your fabulous comments on my poems. With lots of love to you.
He commented 'Uncooked pot' She's broken Into shards..........oh! shattered the heart in the breaking pot
An irrelevant comment from the loved ones breaks the heart. Sweet n simple poem.
A fabulous poem, so often we come across such things in life which is not meant for what andwe think it will serve certain purpose but it does not. Nicely conceived poem.5 *
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Indeed our words can ruin as well as build. It all depends as to how we chose our words. Good metaphorical imagery and insight.