Waiting To See A Daybreak Comments
Standing alone at one end of the street
Is nerve wrecking;
Staring from nowhere to nothingness
Chills my spine.
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When the nemesis decides to intervene Cosmos surrenders; And when the fortune plays its flute The last is the front runner.......waiting to see the rising sun breaking the dark clouds..of hopelessness. a poem full of hope, ...... the first rays of the moring sun as a symbol of hope. thank u dear 'Dr. poetess.. tony
I'm greatly impressed by your assessment of my poem. Thank you so much for that.
Staring from nowhere to nothingness Chills my spine.... So sad and challenging but there is hope- every dark cloud with a silver lining. Thanks.
Congratulations for poem of the day.. Well deserved Hope is the spark to end the hopelessness
You have stunningly captured both the mood of hopelessness and hope. Excellent write! Congratulations on Poem Of The Day, Dr. Bano!
You have caught me right. While writing I was unwilling to remove the element of hope from desperation surrounding me. Thanks for reading!
A philosophical poem bathed with hope, selected as Member PoD, thanks poet and congrats. Subhas
I'll keep wandering on the streets With my head held high; To see every dark cloud with a silver lining And a rising sun after this night. A lovely poem of hope, light and the power of the good spirit. Congratulations Dr. Nikhat.
Very inspiring indeed.....Dr.Nikhat........very well crafted.....congratulation for being selected as P.O.D
I truly elated for this appreciation and selection of my work. I thank 'Poemhunter' for providing me this platform. Thanks!
Beautiful poem. Essence of life is felt here. A wanderer is a sage knowing and understanding all about life. Thank you for sharing and congratulation for member poem place for an excellent poem.
My humble gratitude Savita Tyagi ji for your immensely beautiful words.
An interesting write a pregnant moment waiting to be born 10 +++
Such an inspiring poem, Dr. Nikhat... congrats for being chosen...10+++++
Humble thanks for your lovely words! Thank you for reading my poem.
a poem full of hope that enlightened ways come to stay? ................well penned Nikhat
a poem full of hope that of better enlightened times will follow? ....................wonderfully written Nikhat.
Never alone; in the company of time, fortune and Nemesis always.
'I'll keep wandering on the streets With my head held high; To see every dark cloud with a silver lining And a rising sun after this night.' Great imagery. A very meaningful poem. Congrats.
My sincere thanks Anil Kumar ji for your lovely words and appreciations. It means a lot for me.
It seems like an overview of the ups and downs of life. An amazing poem with philosophical undertones where hope and optimism lead the way. Thanks. I quote: when the fortune plays its flute / The last is the front runner. see every dark cloud with a silver lining / And a rising sun after this night.
Thank you so much Rajnish ji for your brilliant analysis of my poem.
I'll keep wandering on the streets With my head held high; To see every dark cloud with a silver lining And a rising sun after this nigh Great, deserves POD, Congratulations.
A refined poetic imagination, Nikhat. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.
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4/13/2025 9:54:29 AM # 1.0.0
lovely poem! the title is beautiful " Waiting To See A Daybreak"