Monday, August 14, 2017

Vomit All Vices Comments

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Eject matters of sorrow and pain,
Eject agony, obstacles, greed,
And anger and attachment also,
You eject all vices and clear.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Darious Alexopoulos 22 November 2020

All vices should be removed from mind. The beautiful life is ignited with caring and loving feature. You have written a nice poem.

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Richard Wlodarski 25 March 2020

Powerful and catchy title! The poem is worthy of it. Just like a fast that cleanses the body, your poem cleanses the spirit. Excellent work!

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Pushpendra Patel 03 March 2019

We should leave vices and adopt values. Greatest love comes from God through light into Earth. We feel this. This is really great when love is transformed into light of love of wisdom. Love glows and grows with us. This is a great write and you are a nice poet.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 January 2018

A beautifully crafted write that echoes clean living. A piece full of wisdom.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 January 2018

Vomiting vices you will become pure/Positive vibrations will enter within/You will feel purity and pure thoughts...expression carries spiritual spark that bestows pure thoughts and wisdom by bringing closer to God. Thanks dear sir for sharing....10

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 15 August 2017

Graphic title...Virtuously philosophical message...Another pen-gem from your thrill-quill, my friend! ~FjR~

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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