Congrats! You've managed to use simple words to convey such a deep and profound meaning through! Nice alternative rhyming as well! However, I did notice that 'linger' does not really rhyme with 'happier'... Still, great job =)
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Congrats! You've managed to use simple words to convey such a deep and profound meaning through! Nice alternative rhyming as well! However, I did notice that 'linger' does not really rhyme with 'happier'... Still, great job =)