ezzabell fanning

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Saturday, April 12, 2008

Understand Me Comments

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inside

bottled up inside
are the words i never said
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Irene Pang 12 April 2008

Congrats! You've managed to use simple words to convey such a deep and profound meaning through! Nice alternative rhyming as well! However, I did notice that 'linger' does not really rhyme with 'happier'... Still, great job =)

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