Unconditional Love Comments

Cherish every moment of togetherness, and love without condition Rachel Ann Butler

i hope your heart's voice reaches the heart of the one you are trying to get to. good luck, nice poem.

enchanting poem....well expressed emotion and written well....

A wonderful and a distinct way of penning a love poem.

Love that just accompanIes may leave at one time or other in life...love that gets immersed into, will never make a shadow through out your life journey...two different perspectives of love there...good work...thanks...10...

Love that comes with a reason, may vanish with changing season, true i agree with you, lovely poem dear Deependra, wish you all the best

nice poem well penned and sounds good as well Luwi

Good poem. First she says she would be your shadow. But dont want that! And go on defining a shadow and you want her to be for ever on your side. Very good thought, well composed.

love with out condition sure works and satisfies one, s inner feelings.nice write voted10 surys

Lovely piece my friend....they who share the same value of what a heart gives to us all...Love......and the greatest of lifes feeling....beautiful work Deependra 10

'I agree with you as always but do you listen to what my heart says? '...hmmmmnice ending..do you listen what my heart says? ...

i wrote a poem, pleadings of love on similar lines..love me, my beloved, for no reasons at all...

Love that comes with a reason, may vanish with changing season Beautifully expressed! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! CP

Yes? we listen to your heart for those of us who have had to surrender know the language of the heart and how powerful it is. Great writing dear friend.