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Friday, October 23, 2009

Trapped In Pain Comments

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How can I say I'm fine when I'm not
I'm broken inside, my heart is crumbling
My soul is black, in my mind I'm already gone
Pain is still inside of me, like I knew all along pain won't leave me
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blank blank 24 October 2009

Writing stuff like this is the number one way of keeping your sorrows fresh as new. It's all nice and emotional but if you are really writing it with belief that that's you, then your pains are going to remain and hurt you forever. We have to stop fealing sorry for ourselves, get over our pains and learn to get going. If we take a deep breath and try to see the beautiful things in life I'm sure we can find many. That's if you wrote this from your feelings, but if it's just a fun sort of poem writing, then this is nice. Cheers :)

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