To My Angela Comments

great writing. i usually writes about my emotions of the verse. so, i like the picture created by your emotions...in`-depths meaning and metaphors.....Until my journey ends...... good writing

Wisdom breathes through this deep and powerful write! I love it because it is a thought provoking and sensitive write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

''Long days, short years, bitter true'' long days and short years, very good use of paradox, irony and juxtaposition, these are devices used in modern poetry, the theme and the language is super too, i like the poem.