Though you know it anyhow
Listen to me, darling, now,
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Terrific. I only have problem with the line I long to telephone the cops; long in particular. It makes it look like it's what you desire or even crave to do, which I don't think is the sense you want to communicate.
Listen to me darling, now. Good poem with a good rhyme. SYLVA-ONYEMA UBA