We have had our funny ways of doing,
Where you pull and I pull, and now
We have to add a twist to our tango;
For I may just as well call it quits,
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Such a powerful and moving analogy. You carry it deftly and painfully through the work, and the reader shares the confusion and pain all the way through. Powerful writing, good poet.
Sarah, this poem is a real gem....the metaphor of dance to tell the story of the ebb and flow of life. Wonderfully done.